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you just wont let me goRate this Poem
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Hello, Daddy? |
Just let me go
Please let me go
You’re still holding me tight
Stop telling me you need me so
Just remember, I once was your wife
You cheated and left me in tears
My life and my love turned into my biggest fears
The person I gave it all
Threw me off the cliff and watched me fall
Now you’re back to say the things you miss
My sex, my love and my companionship
You show me the passion of making love
Then you run to your girlfriend leaving me with nothing but a hug
I can’t take it anymore
Why cant my heart shut the door
And walk away with my pride
To take in my new life with every stride| On March 15th 2008 Kep89 Said : | |
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Seriously, while i was sleeping did you sneak into my room and cut me open and read the story in my heart? i mean, never been married yet, but the rest of it hits me so close that im about to cry. Thats why i love this one, cause although sad, i never want to forget my scars so i never fall back on them again. great job! |
| On March 7th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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how can a person truly let go when you shered a special bond even if that bond have been broken the cord is still there. beautifully written! |
| On March 5th 2008 betyoucantgess Said : | |
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LOVE IT |
| On March 5th 2008 bluedevilschic Said : | |
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good poem. i know how u feel. |
| On March 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I can relate. Sort-of~ I wish I could just let go~ I liked this one. Good poetry~ |
| On March 4th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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it's so sad but i still love it |
| On March 4th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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This is the best I have read all night! It is really good! nice ryming! |
| On March 3rd 2008 adammckiel2000 Said : | |
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yea this is sad but really good |
| On March 3rd 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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so sad, but very good! :P |
| On March 3rd 2008 RealFiction616 Said : | |
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Very Sad, but a good poem. |
| On March 3rd 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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It sucks, huh-the not being able to let someone go even though they caused so much pain and resentment to push you away in the first place. I can completely understand. Nice write~ |


