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you just wont let me go

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Just let me go

Views (171) Pain Created on 3-3-08 Flag

Please let me go

You’re still holding me tight

Stop telling me you need me so

Just remember, I once was your wife

 

You cheated and left me in tears

My life and my love turned into my biggest fears

The person I gave it all

Threw me off the cliff and watched me fall

 

Now you’re back to say the things you miss

My sex, my love and my companionship

You show me the passion of making love

Then you run to your girlfriend leaving me with nothing but a hug

 

I can’t take it anymore

Why cant my heart shut the door

And walk away with my pride

                      To take in my new life with every stride
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On March 15th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 Seriously, while i was sleeping did you sneak into my room and cut me open and read the story in my heart? i mean, never been married yet, but the rest of it hits me so close that im about to cry. Thats why i love this one, cause although sad, i never want to forget my scars so i never fall back on them again. great job!
On March 7th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord how can a person truly let go when you shered a special bond even if that bond have been broken the cord is still there. beautifully written!
On March 5th 2008 betyoucantgess Said :
betyoucantgess LOVE IT
On March 5th 2008 bluedevilschic Said :
bluedevilschic good poem. i know how u feel.
On March 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I can relate. Sort-of~ I wish I could just let go~ I liked this one. Good poetry~
On March 4th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said :
Jumpy1811 it's so sad but i still love it
On March 4th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is the best I have read all night! It is really good! nice ryming!
On March 3rd 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :
adammckiel2000 yea this is sad but really good
On March 3rd 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 so sad, but very good! :P
On March 3rd 2008 RealFiction616 Said :
RealFiction616 Very Sad, but a good poem.
On March 3rd 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane It sucks, huh-the not being able to let someone go even though they caused so much pain and resentment to push you away in the first place. I can completely understand. Nice write~