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This was written by me at age 8.

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Views (140) Pain Created on 7-20-07 Flag

I feel like there's no way out,

My heads going to explode,

I  want to shout,

It's like I'm in a choke-hold.

 

You's don't know,

How my feelings have been bottled,

I'm about to blow,

I'm not a role model.

 

I have no life,

I have no friends,

There's been so much strife,

Since the war began.

 

Theres no way out,

I have to shout,

GOOD-BYE!

 

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On July 11th 2008 Stolensoul16 Said :
Stolensoul16 Wow. Only 8?
On July 11th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 powerful.....
On March 31st 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX Wow, for only 8 years old this is really good, better than what I could write. It's a deep subject for an 8 year old to talk about though
On August 23rd 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Not bad for 8 years old. It is a shame that you felt that way. I hope things are different for you now. I would love to see what you can write now!!
On August 11th 2007 Jbelled24 Said :
Jbelled24 Eight years old when you wrote this? wow! incredible! Im sorry you felt that way, I hope things are different for you now.
On August 11th 2007 CaliGurl1922 Said :
CaliGurl1922 Wow for 8 years old its good. but the topic is just a little weird at 8 yrs old nobody should think about killin them selfs. but its a really good poem.
On August 11th 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter wonderful work 8 wow
On August 10th 2007 jotoge Said :
jotoge 8 humm amazing
On August 10th 2007 undiie Said :
undiie Holy snap.. When you were 8?! Nice. =]
On August 3rd 2007 PiCkLeS7912 Said :
PiCkLeS7912 Holy cow! This is good for being 8! Actually, that's like INSANELY good for being 8. And Exodiafinder needs a fucking LIFE himself.
On July 26th 2007 Exodiafinder Said :
Exodiafinder YUO SHOULD SERIOUSLY KILL YOURSELF SINCE YOU LIVE SUCH A TERRIBLE AND CRAPPY LIFE
On July 20th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 8!! HOLY..this is good for u only being 8 years old..i like it..if you wouldnt have told me u were 8 when u wrote it..i woulda thought that u wrote it when u were the age u are right now :D nice job :)
On July 20th 2007 Kylie2012 Said :
Kylie2012 great peom LOL!! jkjk!! kylie
On July 20th 2007 spymaster1026 Said :
spymaster1026 This is kinda bad but I was 8 when I made it