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Daddy dear...
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Created on 2-22-08
oh daddy dear, u used to call me every day. but latley i have wondered, why feel this way, u make me sad, you make me cry, but most of all i wonder why, you were there, and now your not, is it me? am i not? am i not smart?am i not pretty? but mostly, do u love me?
Please Login to post comments| On March 19th 2008 kesaia1029 Said : | |
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I know how you feel,my dad HAS been here but he doesn't encourage me at all,he couldn't care less if I dont get into college or get good grades.Great work on the poem! |
| On March 8th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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thts so sad... |
| On February 22nd 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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i can relate
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