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Lost in the Dark

Views (129) Tragedy Created on 4-23-08 Flag
I was a dreamer dreams of love
And all the problems it could solve,
But once the truth came clear to me
No longer could my heart roam free.

I cannot see the way ahead,
The moon is gone,
The stars are dead,
There is a sinking sense of dread,
What lurking threat has darkness bred?

I walk a dark and dreary road
Where jagged rocks break weary bones,
The night is black,
The air is cold,         
I am so very far from home.

This crooked path is old and used
Its followers are all confused,
It twists and turns,
And leads astray,
The wanderers who've lost their way.
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On April 25th 2008 betyoucantgess Said :
betyoucantgess dude, this is frkkin awesome!!!!!
GENIOUS!!!!!
this is amazing
amen man, amen

On April 25th 2008 betyoucantgess Said :
betyoucantgess dude, this is frkkin awesome!!!!!
GENIOUS!!!!!
this is amazing
amen man, amen

On April 25th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster lol, think that came out wrong. nice poem, reallies
On April 25th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster I once got lost in the dark. ... my father then slapped me upside the head. "OPEN YOUR EYES, RETARD!", he screamed to me......
On April 25th 2008 speederspider Said :
speederspider I think this is the best poem for today. I wish this site was more apt to vote up the good poems instead of the spammerific ones.
On April 24th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said :
dropdeadsucka You have know idea how badly this relates to me..=/
On April 23rd 2008 dorkwitfork Said :
dorkwitfork ooh wow ur really good!! BRAVO!!! its very understandable and I totally get it ! nicely done!
On April 23rd 2008 101091 Said :
101091 I really like this. It's really good.