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the moon and the sun
the moon in the water,
so simple,
so quiet,
the sun in the sky,
so brright,
and miss-understood,
the rageing fire, the colling moon,
fire and ice,
fighting over the sky,
and yet there not ment to be,
and as they line together,
they finaly say good bye,
and so ends this night,
| On May 21st 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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2 thumbs up |
| On April 27th 2008 Kep89 Said : | |
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its good but i kinda agree not your best. but if you can say its not your best, you'll always have something better. |
| On April 25th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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as always, i love your work!! |
| On April 25th 2008 vicki721 Said : | |
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i love it... |
| On April 23rd 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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You may say it's not ur best, but I think it's pretty unique. Nice job! :) |


