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what is life, life is what, what we want it to be, what do we want, do we want it, life, to live, to die, to live life is a blessing, for other a sin, sin, this word meaning evil in the eyes of god, god, all powerfull, all seeing, all knowing, but does he know what we dont, we dont, we dont know what we are hee for, life is what we live waiting, waiting, waiting for the awnsers we will never know without trying to know, we try, we try to secseed in what we want, but is what we want right, a question i ask myself every day, days, days go bye and still i think of them, them, the ones i call my freinds, thoes of who i care, care, a word used to say that someone, something maters, maters, do we, do i mater, my freinds, my family, they mater, but do i, in a world of people who are selfsenterd, or other wise known as humans, am i one of them, them, people, humans, who are here liveing just to die, am i here, am i, am i even alive, alive, what does this word reprasent, the meaning of are porpose, are porpose, are meaning, what is it, why is it, why is life this way, what is the porpose of ife, life, life is what we mae of it that is are porpose, that is its meaning, but i n the eyes of god is it right,
| On July 30th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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i love this one its different than any other poem i've ever seen i like your creativity and uniqueness its very refreshing and your work is amazing good job! |
| On March 15th 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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Dude... I like the reflection of every sentence in there. |
| On March 14th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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I love the line "here living just to die," it's great!!! |


