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this is weird, long but so POTORate this Poem
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walk |
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just a random set of words |
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only friends |
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reckoning |
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no pain |
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sentinel |
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society's tithe |
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society's tithe v02 |
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metal |
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valentine's agnst |
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the calling |
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life is like a song |
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some friendship |
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understood |
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truth |
Masked
with my mask i watch you
i see your angelic face
your flawless eyes
but you dont see me
you see your dreams
as you think they are
you think about this man
this masked man
i now have you
i have piqued your interests
But who is this?
the infindel w/ me
is this Him?
i hope not
though i know it is all for naught
He is here
how can i make her remember me?
see me?
what does she want so?
her voice
she wants it to soar
it will
you listen
you are mine again
not for the same reason
but it is good enough for me
He still wanders in my Sanctuary
i will let him
as long as He leaves in time
He can have her
the day one
i need only one
she is doing well
she could go somewhere
i think she might
she is
as far as this
i never believed
that is fine
she can have my talent
but she doesnt visit
and He is lingering back
crawling in my Sanctuary
this is all wrong
must i take my talent back?
then youd listen
but i cannot
He will leave
my Sanctuary wont be disturbed
i will meet her
the true her
He will be taken care of
she comes first though
she looks for her tutor
that once lifeless ghoul
she must think herself crazed
she is truly
she made her own problem
but here i swoop down
dazzled by her tutor turned human
she swoons
i catch her
there she is
in my hands
she is so much more...perfect
i cant just take the night one
the one in my Sanctuary
but this one too
He will be furious
but he never mattered
first where to take her?
i know
to my Sanctuary
i will bring night and day togehter
i will own both angel beauties
He would be proud
except for the fact that He's furious
He feels wronged
and He was
but he never mattered
here they both sit
staring at each other
than i
one loyal to me
on loyal to Him
they argue
the day helped the night away
the day must go
i became stingy
i have lost both
bring day back i will
i swoop to His house
there He stands
deeply plunges the blade
of which i willingly let him
| On May 13th 2007 suicidalslug Said : | |
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weird indeed, but it sucks you in |
| On May 11th 2007 thecolorblack Said : | |
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...im going to read every one of your poems...its long past due for me to. |
| On May 9th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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I like it! |


