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walk |
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just a random set of words |
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only friends |
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reckoning |
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no pain |
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sentinel |
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society's tithe |
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society's tithe v02 |
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metal |
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valentine's agnst |
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the calling |
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life is like a song |
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some friendship |
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understood |
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him and her
there he went
along with his life
boring,mundane
something changed all that
she to be more precise
she rocked his world
and became infatuated
oh so very intreagued
the world went on
and he didnt notice
wouldnt notice
not till its all over
he begun shaping up
and became a greater him
than he ever wouldve been
it was only a matter of time
he wanted to ask
so he did
shw was wary
but she said yes
it went very weell
he watched her
and she watched him
it may have lasted forever
but alas it didnt
the wandering eye
oh that evil sickness
he was soon to learn
he never heard it
from her at least
she denied it everytime
but it was all for naught
he had to leave her
how long had it been?
she didnt say the word anymore
it was so true,she was gone
he left her
and he tried to forget her
tried to catch up to the world
but he could never catch up
he swam in his despair
and bottles of cognac
it all just didnt matter anymore
only her,only her
his grades felt it
his collegues suspected it
his friends knew it
he felt it
he finally had enough
this was it
why? why?
he couldnt deal anymore
no more life he could lead
nothing near life-like
towards depression's sticky end
at the end of it the wall stared upon him
the wall that stopped all
too hard to rip through
the free fall cannot be stopped
there it leads to all things destroyed
there he started preparing
setting his things in order
the humans would find him
he hoped to God its her that does
he sent off the text
shed surely understand
shed hate herself for it
he loved that thought
there he had his last supper
at the strike of twelve
that dearly horrible toll
the clock struck him dead
she was hurrying
she may have made it
if not for the long drive
the drive from the Other's house
she still loved him
th wandering eye caught her
in its grasp she fought
but it took this to break it
| On May 13th 2007 suicidalslug Said : | |
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:*( how sad |
| On May 5th 2007 lalasodapop Said : | |
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i really love this poem. i think it's one of your best. no rhyme but it flows wonderfully. it's full of so much emotion. and im agreeing with someone else. im buying you some happy pills:D maybe we coudl share them, xD |
| On May 1st 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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his grades felt it
his collegues suspected it
his friends knew it
he felt it
That's my favorite part! I love love love this poem!! |
| On April 29th 2007 thecolorblack Said : | |
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Might not rhyme but has flow and feeling. Nice! |
| On April 26th 2007 Darkrisky Said : | |
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great job...but seriously Devin...i'm buying you some happy pills...lol ^.^ |
| On April 26th 2007 marlana79 Said : | |
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I like it:) |
| On April 25th 2007 soinlove83 Said : | |
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wow |


