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him and her

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there he went

along with his life

boring,mundane

something changed all that

 

she to be more precise

she rocked his world

and became infatuated

oh so very intreagued

 

the world went on

and he didnt notice

wouldnt notice

not till its all over

 

he begun shaping up

and became a greater him

than he ever wouldve been

it was only a matter of time

 

he wanted to ask

so he did

shw was wary

but she said yes

 

it went very weell

he watched her

and she watched him

it may have lasted forever 

 

but alas it didnt

the wandering eye

oh that evil sickness

he was soon to learn

 

he never heard it

from her at least

she denied it everytime

but it was all for naught

 

he had to leave her

how long had it been?

she didnt say the word anymore

it was so true,she was gone

 

he left her

and he tried to forget her

tried to catch up to the world

but he could never catch up

 

he swam in his despair

and bottles of cognac

it all just didnt matter anymore

only her,only her

 

his grades felt it

his collegues suspected it

his friends knew it

he felt it

 

he finally had enough

this was it

why? why?

he couldnt deal anymore

 

no more life he could lead

nothing near life-like

towards depression's sticky end

at the end of it the wall stared upon him

 

the wall that stopped all

too hard to rip through

the free fall cannot be stopped

there it leads to all things destroyed

 

there he started preparing

setting his things in order

the humans would find him

he hoped to God its her that does

 

he sent off the text

shed surely understand

shed hate herself for it

he loved that thought

 

there he had his last supper

at the strike of twelve

that dearly horrible toll

the clock struck  him dead

 

she was hurrying

she may have made it

if not for the long drive

the drive from the Other's house

 

she still loved him

th wandering eye caught her

in its grasp she fought

but it took this to break it 

 

 

 

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On May 13th 2007 suicidalslug Said :
suicidalslug :*( how sad
On May 5th 2007 lalasodapop Said :
lalasodapop i really love this poem. i think it's one of your best. no rhyme but it flows wonderfully. it's full of so much emotion. and im agreeing with someone else. im buying you some happy pills:D maybe we coudl share them, xD
On May 1st 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv his grades felt it his collegues suspected it his friends knew it he felt it That's my favorite part! I love love love this poem!!
On April 29th 2007 thecolorblack Said :
thecolorblack Might not rhyme but has flow and feeling. Nice!
On April 26th 2007 Darkrisky Said :
Darkrisky great job...but seriously Devin...i'm buying you some happy pills...lol ^.^
On April 26th 2007 marlana79 Said :
marlana79 I like it:)
On April 25th 2007 soinlove83 Said :
soinlove83 wow