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just a bit of randomness i came up w/

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metal

Views (99) Pain Created on 2-16-07 Flag

how does metal feel to you people?

cold,barren,unforgiving?

i have a totally different view

 

metal isnt cold,the uses of metal is cold

i feel metal,it is warm and inviting

truth held between its layers

 

metal doesnt run through your veins,does it?

of course not

you dont deserve the pleasure

 

the truth is very hard for you to comprehend

metal through your veins would help

the warmth of utter pain

 

it helps you,shows you the way,the truth

it tells your true calling

let it take you

 

you are invincable

no one can see it,until its too late

you are then an abomination in the light of humans

 

but then you dont need their acceptance

you kno what you have to do

keep the metal coming

 

the outer you will suffer

then crack

then crumble

 

it will show the real you

hard dark metal

grafted to every part of you

 

 

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