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i have a 2nd version that i am workin onRate this Poem
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society's tithe
the blood gushes for a few heart pumps
slowly stopping to a slow trickle
trying to clot itself up for mere survival
survival is on the agenda for the body,not the mind
u made it this way
u were too naive,too trusting
they have left u barren and blank
but who's fault is it?
it is urs
why did u let them get to u?
they didnt have to,they didnt before
u wanted it,fame glory and Her
and wut have u gotten to show for it?
two deep cuts down ur forearms
u couldnt handle the pressure of popularity
u were a novelty to the masses
something,after getting old and raggedy,able to throw away
no regard for the life they have totally screwed up
his friends will remember him
if the masses think of him they will remember a mental case
slowly stopping to a slow trickle
trying to clot itself up for mere survival
survival is on the agenda for the body,not the mind
u made it this way
u were too naive,too trusting
they have left u barren and blank
but who's fault is it?
it is urs
why did u let them get to u?
they didnt have to,they didnt before
u wanted it,fame glory and Her
and wut have u gotten to show for it?
two deep cuts down ur forearms
u couldnt handle the pressure of popularity
u were a novelty to the masses
something,after getting old and raggedy,able to throw away
no regard for the life they have totally screwed up
his friends will remember him
if the masses think of him they will remember a mental case
| On May 5th 2007 500nets Said : | |
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couldn't agree more |
| On April 26th 2007 SlicedLegOnRye Said : | |
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I'm going to read the second version...
You should read my "Do you want to be popular?" |


