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I Will Not Let You in

Views (125) Tragedy Created on 4-18-07 Flag

I will not let you in,
No, matter how hard you bang;
I will not let you in.

I will not let you in,
No, matter how hard you pull or push;
I will not let you in.

I will not let you in,
Now, matter how much you yell and curse;
I will not let you in.

I will not let you in,
No, for silver nor paper;
I will not let you in.

I will not let you in,
To do your evil deeds,
For they are hideous deeds,
I will not let you in!
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On April 25th 2007 rellcinko Said :
rellcinko i like this poem
On April 24th 2007 11twizz11 Said :
11twizz11 how will you get out?
On April 21st 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx very interesting
On April 20th 2007 lilyqueen777 Said :
lilyqueen777 i love ur inspiration for this...gosh it's wonderful
On April 19th 2007 angeleyez7779 Said :
angeleyez7779 Interesting I like this one.
On April 19th 2007 isdrowning Said :
isdrowning that can be taken on so many deeper levels. i can think of a couple. if you think too hard, it feels like something brilliant. the repetition is key in this one. it shows the strength of emotion. overall, i like it.
On April 18th 2007 sonicfalcan Said :
sonicfalcan I wrote this when my little brother was trying to get into something. I must have then twisted it, to make it sound like he was a demon. In this poem, although he really isn't, he is just four year old boy.