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Author's note: I dont think I explained the source enough in the last poem. When I was going through basic training for the Army, I wrote my then girlfriend a letter everyday. I came across a few poems I wrote her last time I visited her. I callled her my then girlfriend, because we are now married, and I couldn't be happier.
Now what you came to read:
In my bunk I still lay
And I haven't a clue
The only thing I am certain of
Is I'm in love with you
We don't know where we're going
Or what we will do
One thing you can rely on is
Wherever you go, I'll be right beside you
College, marriage
Child after child
Sight will go, hair gray
After a while
But that doesn't matter
Because there's one thing I am sure of
Every night, for the rest of my life
I'll fall asleep next to the one I truly love...you
| On January 2nd 2008 Autumnr1 Said : | |
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nice |
| On November 11th 2007 writter1987 Said : | |
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this one is even better..*sparkles* |
| On September 6th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. Great job. It's so sweet and deep at the same time. |
| On September 6th 2007 sabrina225 Said : | |
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love it...your wife should be happy...not many people write stuff like this expressen there love for someone....i loved it the first one was my favorite all time though |
| On September 6th 2007 sammilynn09 Said : | |
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i like it... is real good |
| On September 6th 2007 Pooh455 Said : | |
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like i siad she is one lucky girl. nice job. |
| On September 6th 2007 Pooh455 Said : | |
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like i siad she is one lucky girl. nice job. |
| On September 6th 2007 soldierofLHS Said : | |
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I have one more after this coming soon |


