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Some more from basic

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Thoughts Of A Soldier Part 2

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Author's note: I dont think I explained the source enough in the last poem. When I was going through basic training for the Army, I wrote my then girlfriend a letter everyday. I came across a few poems I wrote her last time I visited her. I callled her my then girlfriend, because we are now married, and I couldn't be happier.

 Now what you came to read:

 

In my bunk I still lay

And I haven't a clue

The only thing I am certain of

Is I'm in love with you

 

We don't know where we're going

Or what we will do

One thing you can rely on is

Wherever you go, I'll be right beside you

 

College, marriage

Child after child

Sight will go, hair gray

After a while

 

But that doesn't matter

Because there's one thing I am sure of

Every night, for the rest of my life

I'll fall asleep next to the one I truly love...you

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On January 2nd 2008 Autumnr1 Said :
Autumnr1 nice
On November 11th 2007 writter1987 Said :
writter1987 this one is even better..*sparkles*
On September 6th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I love it. Great job. It's so sweet and deep at the same time.
On September 6th 2007 sabrina225 Said :
sabrina225 love it...your wife should be happy...not many people write stuff like this expressen there love for someone....i loved it the first one was my favorite all time though
On September 6th 2007 sammilynn09 Said :
sammilynn09 i like it... is real good
On September 6th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 like i siad she is one lucky girl. nice job.
On September 6th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 like i siad she is one lucky girl. nice job.
On September 6th 2007 soldierofLHS Said :
soldierofLHS I have one more after this coming soon