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Created on 3-2-08
All Alone
Left quiet and motionless
Abandoned my Coffin.... now
Silent Symphonies thundering in my head like a steel mill lullaby
So annoyingly soothing
my hands no longer hurt from all that work for him
my backs no longer sore from the weight of my world
there is only an all consuming peace
that feels like wading into a pool of cool clear water
My eyes are wide open but there is nothing left to see.
All alone I lay in delicious restlessness unable to move
Relief finally picking at my extremities
For Being the End of my Life or my Last Stop.
there seems like So much to look Forward to
Tell me, Was death really supposed to be this great
Left quiet and motionless
Abandoned my Coffin.... now
Silent Symphonies thundering in my head like a steel mill lullaby
So annoyingly soothing
my hands no longer hurt from all that work for him
my backs no longer sore from the weight of my world
there is only an all consuming peace
that feels like wading into a pool of cool clear water
My eyes are wide open but there is nothing left to see.
All alone I lay in delicious restlessness unable to move
Relief finally picking at my extremities
For Being the End of my Life or my Last Stop.
there seems like So much to look Forward to
Tell me, Was death really supposed to be this great
Please Login to post comments| On March 17th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love your style here~ It's catchy, and you capture the emotions well also~ lovely job!! |
| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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the alleration is great! |
| On March 2nd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I really like the imagery in this. |
