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Am I really falling in love??

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Ashley Du

ARE WE IN LOVE?

Views (174) Love Created on 6-13-08 Flag

Before I let you be with me,

First of all I have to see,

What love means to you,

Before I let you put me through,

A set up for another heartache,

I really don't want my heart to break,

I don't want to let you go,

Baby I just have to know.

 

I'll tell you what you make me feel,

Just to let you know its real,

When I think of you I smile,

And my heart stops beating for awhile,

Your kiss leaves me out of breathe,

So I need to sit down and rest,

But you get me back up on my feet,

Hold me so close I can hear your heart beat.

 

Please say "I love you" one more time,

If you don't mean it thats a crime,

I can't believe that this is true,

I found someone special...and thats you,

Still...how do I know if this ain't fake,

If this is a dream I don't want to be awake,

I really wish we stay together,

When you say always, I whisper forever! 

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On June 27th 2008 MCRsLover Said :
MCRsLover awesome job!!
On June 22nd 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 wow you got talent!!! KMP please :)
On June 18th 2008 MellowK Said :
MellowK I Don't Get It How You And ME Go Threw The Same Stuff The Same Time In Life.. But You Hit Exactly What I'm Thinking With Every Peom You Wright Amazing.
On June 15th 2008 sorah17 Said :
sorah17 Thats a real good poem you have talent
On June 14th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster BETTER GRAB A PARACHUTE!
On June 14th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Another good one. It's hard to fall in love when your hearts been broken by someone else, but you should just go with the flow I reckon.
On June 14th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone great work...just a helpful tip...you can cut down the rhyming by using a sentances in-between that doesn't rhyme but use a rhyme to the word before that you would normally rhyme with...just giving you some helpful advice for later on...great work
On June 13th 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei Still great! I mean, is it really so much to ask? Oh... its just so sweet.
On June 13th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE I absolutely love it! You are a really good writter!
On June 13th 2008 hayleyswiger14 Said :
hayleyswiger14 i can 1000% relate to this...love it...let me know if you write anymore id love to read them. :] if you get a chance i have two more poems up. so checkem out.
On June 13th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 When i think of you and smile, my heart stops beating for a while, Love that part! Good job!
On June 13th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 When i think of you and smile, my heart stops beating for a while, Love that part! Good job!
On June 13th 2008 JustifyMisery Said :
JustifyMisery this is really good i love it you're an amazing writer KMP!
On June 13th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 Wow i really love this obe....its cute
On June 13th 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 i love this one u have amazing talent KMP
On June 13th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I can really relate to this one. Awesome job! :)