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THIS IS FOR MY EX......IT REALLY JUST CAME TO ME ALL OF A SUDDEN SO I WROTE IT DOWN IN MY PLANNER DURING SOCIAL STUDIES! ANYWHO HERE IT IS:

 

Swish, swish.

Tick, tock.

The sound of your pants.

And the noise of the clock.

Waiting in agony.

With no one beside me.

Hoping and praying we were meant to be.

Fate should bring us closer.

I just wish we weren't over.

If only I could turn back time.

Make you promise you wont lie.

Love is a strong word.

It drove me crazy and messed up my world.

I never knew what it meant.

You seemed like a gift heaven sent.

Now I see you were a joke.

It makes me sick...I gag, I choke.

The love of my life.

Is the one in front of me.

Opened a door that I couldn't see.

My friends like him better.

And he means forever.

Now your just the guy who sits diagonally.

From me in Social Studies and P.E.

I never say hi or hey.

I just go on hour by hour, day by day.

Your just another face in the crowd.

So let me be me.

Crazy and loud.

No I don't love you anymore.

You tore my heart open and left it all sore. This is goodbye forever my enemie.

Don't you worry, this won't be the last you'll see of me! 

 

 

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On June 13th 2008 AirplaneMan Said :
AirplaneMan killa flow..reminds me of my rap days..well written
On June 13th 2008 curkaxboo Said :
curkaxboo awesome. very well written!
On June 9th 2008 hayleyswiger14 Said :
hayleyswiger14 this is simply amazing well written.
On June 7th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE Wow thats ah-mazing! I love it!! =] your an amazing writer!
On June 7th 2008 disneyfan12 Said :
disneyfan12 Whoa! that's amazing!♥
On June 4th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said :
13sweetcheeks omg this its good...i love it!!!!!!!!!!
On June 4th 2008 DayummManders Said :
DayummManders Omg this is Amazing =]
On June 4th 2008 tamarajasmine5 Said :
my picture
woahhh really good =)
On June 4th 2008 Trena09 Said :
Trena09 i really like this good job!!!!!
On June 4th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 Oh, it's called "Shining Star" let me know what you think!
On June 4th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 wow...very good! I know how this is! I have a poem on my page...I don't remember what it is called, I will let yiu know! It this reminds me of it!
On June 3rd 2008 vance4 Said :
vance4 Very nice! The first thing that came to my mind was "The shadows of my heart" You can use it if you want but if you don't like it no biggie!
On June 3rd 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 I have felt this way, it's the reason i used to ignore my guy-friend! great job =]
On June 3rd 2008 lavenderloveu Said :
lavenderloveu oh srry that happened, but awesome poem! i enjoyed it. will u read mine? theyre ok. lol =]
On June 3rd 2008 babygurlj6 Said :
babygurlj6 its really nice...sumtimes i get ideas out of the random like that too!
On June 3rd 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Loved the flow of this one
On June 3rd 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX i really really love the emotion in this one!! great job!!
On June 3rd 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 i love it that is exactly what happened to be a few years ago i love it!!!
On June 3rd 2008 MCRsLover Said :
MCRsLover amazing
On June 3rd 2008 JustifyMisery Said :
JustifyMisery wow this is so powerful! i enjoyed reading it!!!
On June 3rd 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster nice poem, really it is. thanks for sharing
On June 3rd 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I like the begining part where it went "Swish, swish. Tick, tock." lol nice work!