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Goodbye |
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Far Away Love |
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I can finally see! |
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Hard for Me! |
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Sick Feeling |
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Tears in His Eyes |
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Always! Not Forever! |
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Hard Times |
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Confussed?? |
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Just some quotes... |
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Quotes #2 |
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Quotes #3 |
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Love of my life...or are you? |
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Questions |
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Ashley Du |
Untitled
THIS IS FOR MY EX......IT REALLY JUST CAME TO ME ALL OF A SUDDEN SO I WROTE IT DOWN IN MY PLANNER DURING SOCIAL STUDIES! ANYWHO HERE IT IS:
Swish, swish.
Tick, tock.
The sound of your pants.
And the noise of the clock.
Waiting in agony.
With no one beside me.
Hoping and praying we were meant to be.
Fate should bring us closer.
I just wish we weren't over.
If only I could turn back time.
Make you promise you wont lie.
Love is a strong word.
It drove me crazy and messed up my world.
I never knew what it meant.
You seemed like a gift heaven sent.
Now I see you were a joke.
It makes me sick...I gag, I choke.
The love of my life.
Is the one in front of me.
Opened a door that I couldn't see.
My friends like him better.
And he means forever.
Now your just the guy who sits diagonally.
From me in Social Studies and P.E.
I never say hi or hey.
I just go on hour by hour, day by day.
Your just another face in the crowd.
So let me be me.
Crazy and loud.
No I don't love you anymore.
You tore my heart open and left it all sore. This is goodbye forever my enemie.
Don't you worry, this won't be the last you'll see of me!
| On June 13th 2008 AirplaneMan Said : | |
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killa flow..reminds me of my rap days..well written |
| On June 13th 2008 curkaxboo Said : | |
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awesome.
very well written! |
| On June 9th 2008 hayleyswiger14 Said : | |
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this is simply amazing well written. |
| On June 7th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said : | |
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Wow thats ah-mazing! I love it!! =] your an amazing writer! |
| On June 7th 2008 disneyfan12 Said : | |
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Whoa! that's amazing!♥ |
| On June 4th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said : | |
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omg this its good...i love it!!!!!!!!!! |
| On June 4th 2008 DayummManders Said : | |
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Omg this is Amazing =] |
| On June 4th 2008 tamarajasmine5 Said : | |
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woahhh really good =) |
| On June 4th 2008 Trena09 Said : | |
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i really like this good job!!!!! |
| On June 4th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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Oh, it's called "Shining Star" let me know what you think! |
| On June 4th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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wow...very good! I know how this is! I have a poem on my page...I don't remember what it is called, I will let yiu know! It this reminds me of it! |
| On June 3rd 2008 vance4 Said : | |
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Very nice! The first thing that came to my mind was "The shadows of my heart" You can use it if you want but if you don't like it no biggie! |
| On June 3rd 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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I have felt this way, it's the reason i used to ignore my guy-friend! great job =] |
| On June 3rd 2008 lavenderloveu Said : | |
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oh srry that happened, but awesome poem! i enjoyed it. will u read mine? theyre ok. lol =] |
| On June 3rd 2008 babygurlj6 Said : | |
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its really nice...sumtimes i get ideas out of the random like that too! |
| On June 3rd 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Loved the flow of this one |
| On June 3rd 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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i really really love the emotion in this one!! great job!! |
| On June 3rd 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said : | |
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i love it that is exactly what happened to be a few years ago i love it!!! |
| On June 3rd 2008 MCRsLover Said : | |
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amazing |
| On June 3rd 2008 JustifyMisery Said : | |
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wow this is so powerful! i enjoyed reading it!!! |
| On June 3rd 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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nice poem, really it is. thanks for sharing |
| On June 3rd 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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I like the begining part where it went "Swish, swish. Tick, tock." lol nice work! |


