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I'm OK

Views (122) Passion Created on 5-28-08 Flag

This is for my ex who broke my heart 3 times. I used to want to be his friend when I wrote this but now I hate him. Hate is a strong word and I really mean it!! 

 

 My hearts actually alright,

I got some sleep last night,

And its all because you talked to me.

No more wondering,

On what could have been,

Cuz now I know its not supposed to be.

Never any tears froem my eyes,

No I don't despise you,

Because  I know that our love is forever true.

Baby don't fret,

We ain't over yet so,

Don't ever let our memories go.

You pinky promised,

And you were always so honest,

But I've never had any doubts.

When you got together with her 

It really crushed my world,

To the point were I just had to let it out. 

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On June 1st 2008 curkaxboo Said :
curkaxboo i love this! it reminds me of what happened to me. something very similar!
On June 1st 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 Awwww I hope everything works out :)
On May 30th 2008 MellowK Said :
MellowK WoW. I Know How That Feels Exactly!
On May 29th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 That was really good! I loved it! "my heart is actually alright, I got some sleep last night, all because you talked to me"...I did that last night too! my ex called and things seemed ok for a moment! I know how it feels and it sucks! but you are a very strong person! you will be ok! I believe in you! -Alie!
On May 29th 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei It's cute and sad at the same time - especially because of your disclaimer at the top. Keep writing ^_^ I like your work.
On May 29th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said :
13sweetcheeks this is cute i got kind of the same feeling
On May 29th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone very purrrrdy...hell I think I've been there myself...I like the emotion of this piece berry powerful...thug
On May 29th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 veeerey pretty and strong
On May 29th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard This is amazing. I agree with the comment below mine... the rhymes are subtle and powerful. Brilliantly written!
On May 29th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX i love it, the rhymes are subtle and powerful at the same time
On May 28th 2008 JustifyMisery Said :
JustifyMisery aww i am sorry but its lovely
On May 28th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x aww... wow I've got that same feeling nice work!!