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Written when I was missing my ex

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Nobody

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im surrounded by people,

but i feel so lonely,

 nobody gets it,

they don't even know me.

 

my hands are shakin'

i need to be awakined,

my eyes are shut,

this is just to much.

 

i bit off more than i could chew,

and if only you knew,

how i felt all the time,

then this poem wouldn't be just a bunch of rhymes.

 

well obviously,

you never loved me,

cuz why ain't you cryin',

boy this whole time you been lyin'.

 

no more playin' your games,

hang your head n shame,

cuz im comin' out on top,

and i ain't ever gonna stop.

 

i'll get another guy,

and you'll be askin' why,

cuz he loves that im crazy,

he tells all his friends that im his lady!

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On May 27th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 i love it but lets shoot the person who made you write it
On May 27th 2008 MellowK Said :
MellowK And Again I will Comment To Tell You This Poem Would tottaly fit me if i broke up with my jackass BF... ((long story))
On May 27th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 i loved it...guys suck..i had the wosrt heatgreak ever..i know how it feels to be hurt!
On May 24th 2008 JustifyMisery Said :
JustifyMisery AHH love it!
On May 23rd 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone greatness.
On May 23rd 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX love it!!
On May 23rd 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard This is really good.
On May 23rd 2008 MellowK Said :
MellowK WoW I Love This One Alot ITs Amazing Great Work!
On May 22nd 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 really good
On May 22nd 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 i like this one!!! good job :D
On May 22nd 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster i wish people didnt know me. liked the poem
On May 22nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow this is amazing!