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How I'm feeling about my boyfriend now!

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Love of my life...or are you?

Views (149) Anger Created on 5-8-08 Flag



Do you ever wonder why,

Why you made me cry,

Last night I couldn't sleep,

My thoughts were to deep.

 

Am I really what you want,

I mean...what if we got caught?

Do you really got my back,

If you don't, then thats just whack!

 

You know I want you so bad,

But your really makin' me mad,

These tears fall from my eyes,

And I just want you to try.

 

I am so confused,

I really hate being used,

If you like her so much,

Why is it me you touch?

 

Your always far away,

I just want you to stay,

I really don't understand,

Why you don't want to hold my hand.

 

So what if everyone knows,

Do you just want to let go,

So what if a teacher sees,

Do you really love me?

 

Can you please look my way,

And honesly say,

Just tell me one time,

"Baby...I'm lucky that your mine!"



On May 12th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 aww sweet!
On May 9th 2008 Ihatemyself13 Said :
Ihatemyself13 Wow....it really amazing. I think you r good this poem. So I love it. :)
On May 9th 2008 JustifyMisery Said :
JustifyMisery AHH THIS IS AMAZING!!! i love it
On May 8th 2008 Emmelene Said :
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nice poem! your an exelent writer
On May 8th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I really like this one. Maybe some day, it'll be one famous song... I just know it. Nice work! :)
On May 8th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 Good Job =] the last part really does tie everything together!!!!
On May 8th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone Very nicely written...I like the last part of the poem it pulls everything together...great work
On May 8th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster good thing to know im not the only one who uses the word, "whack",lol. wonderful poem. i dont think will ever understand why guys will not appreciate how lucky they are to have whoever thye have. but, if guys were so attached to teh girls, then, the girls wouldnt like that. all humans confuse me,lol.
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