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Created on 3-13-08
In the early morning
haze,
I wiggle my toes
futher into the sand,
Beside me you sit and
light yet another cigarette,
As waves linger in our
bay.
Your eyes fixed on the
majestic deep blue ocean
and the ever growing
golden orb on the horizon.
My eyes fixed on you.
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Please Login to post comments| On March 24th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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you describe so much with so little words
great job! |
| On March 14th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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its really good |
| On March 13th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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it's cute! |
| On March 13th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I love it I live on the eastern shore in MD and I have the bay on one side and the ocean on the other this reminds me of my first love lol |
| On March 13th 2008 Vestque Said : | |
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I like it...reminds me of anime...though I think everything reminds me of anime LOL |
| On March 13th 2008 sageravens Said : | |
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I like it. I'm not sure what the format is but I like it. |
| On March 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I like~ really nice job! |
| On March 13th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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great decription on this poem so great job |
| On March 13th 2008 katkent15 Said : | |
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that about sums it up!! lol i would like 2 comment how much u can describe in here in a few verses! good job! |
| On March 13th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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I like it very nicely done.. |
