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Hidden Love

Views (244) Pain Created on 6-24-07 Flag

My love for you it may not seem clear,

But the pain is something that I fear,

When I think about you it brings such sweet sorrow,

To the eyes and the mind till the end of tomorrow,

I dont want to tell you, it may bring more pain,

But if I tell you, It may be a gain,

My love, dont be different then what you are,

or we'll be more farther than the closest shooting star.

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On July 1st 2007 m3gG1e9o0 Said :
m3gG1e9o0 i think this every damn day of my life
On June 29th 2007 Toxxicduck Said :
Toxxicduck I LOVE it, thats exactly what I felt! You never know unless you try, I tried and look where Im at now! =D
On June 26th 2007 sk8rxpunk Said :
sk8rxpunk if anybody thinks its a breaking up poem, its not, but yeah. thanks for the comments so far!
On June 25th 2007 desareegreene Said :
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omg I can totally relate to this. I went through something and this totally describes it. Keep on writing. . . its great!
On June 24th 2007 boykrazy88 Said :
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omg i love it i cried
On June 24th 2007 Jake720 Said :
Jake720 beautiful, greatness, amazing ,and i love it.keep it up
On June 24th 2007 Gigglez200969 Said :
Gigglez200969 amazing!!!
On June 24th 2007 sammysosa10293 Said :
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love it