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Created:
06/09 2008
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201
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Other
My Poems
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Ana~Mia |
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27
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My Eyes... |
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Untitled* |
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Untitled |
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It's nameless~ |
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19
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I wish |
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18
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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Untitled |
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I won't~ |
Untitled
Your outdated design
on what's being read
My dizzying mind
Shall ruin my head
I'll contemplate you
til I'm past understanding
I'm sick of this song theme
that seems all too branding
Tatoo of my heart
the beat you may sing to
It sings It's own tune
and says to believe you
Where have I been
and where have I run to
I remember some parts of me
too bright to cling to
I'm in ruin~ I helped create it
I'm still undoing~ I still sedate it
Meditative~ pill related
I hate my new addictions
Can't stand this new-age act
I know you lost me~need me anyway
Fight to get me back
You helped create this song
I'm tired and you're still strong~
Please Login to post comments| On June 22nd 2008 flutytute Said: |
| Awww Ash. I loved it! |
| On June 16th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said: |
| Loved it! |
| On June 12th 2008 Thuggishone Said: |
| heh...you don't even tell me you have a new poem... pfft and yet I guess that means I'm norrow minded or something nice poem anyway |
| On June 11th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said: |
| this is really good. i love it! |
| On June 11th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said: |
| good. |
| On June 11th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: |
| I hate this!! :) I do ~ I have 2 admit I don't remember where I was when writing~ thanks anyway still |
| On June 10th 2008 Pikkakard Said: |
| Great poem. Love the line "I'm in ruin~ I helped create it" Love the creativity |
| On June 10th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| I love your poems as always! Keep up the great work! :) |
| On June 9th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: |
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| Gosh~ don't leave a damn point minus a comment~ thanks |
| On June 9th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| Loved this, especially the line, I'm in ruin~ I helped create it, I'm still undoing~ I still sedate it, can definitely relate to this, Good Job
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| On June 9th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| This is good! Loves it! ~Kudos~ to you! :) |
