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I was tired again u guys

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Created: 06/03 2008
Views: 277
Category: Worry

My Poems

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+ 27
My Eyes...
+ 15
MAYBE~
+ 21
Forest
+ 21
Flower*
+ 18
Dreaming
+ 17
Everything's Crying~
+ 17
Untitled*
+ 12
Untitled
+ 16
It's nameless~
+ 19
I wish
+ 18
Feel Nothing
+ 19
Floating~
+ 20
Untitled
+ 17
I won't~

So far gone*

    So maybe she's not the same

    The same will usually leave her

    Her questions of what's really sane

    The answers can decieve her

    Hounding endless questions

    She sees through bad intentions

Why would she ever visit that place again~

 

    They say she's bright

    A beautiful girl 

    She doesn't notice

    She's lost that thrill

Straining to see that light

 Howe did she get to where they don't know

 

    One can see she's sad

    and know she's far past scared

    They can't label her mad

    With a gaze surpassing theirs

    They can't councel her

    She's already counceling them

   

    They read up assigned research

    It's sad she's lived the pages

    Aquired them in stages

   

    Dizzying

    Exhausting herself

    An overdose in feeling

    Her intuitive nature

    It weakens her in dealing

 

    She doesn't wish to leave anyone

    When she's so right It's wrong to them

    You can't leave her alone too long

    So far away from where she belongs

    Too far away~ and then she's gone 

     

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On October 9th 2008 stef4732 Said: 
stef4732 very clear and well written love it
On August 6th 2008 flutytute Said: 
flutytute Amazing is all I have to say.
On June 8th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 Marvelous, Love your words, so flow
On June 8th 2008 toxxicskank Said: 
toxxicskank i love you choice of words in your poems. Its amazing! love it.
On June 8th 2008 Wyldemiller Said: 
Wyldemiller A wonderment of woven predicaments flow from such minds who possess thoughts such as these. We ponder each passing breath to succomb to the relinquishments and lay down our flag that we yet wave in peace treaty with our inner beast. Bravery and honesty i give you for writing such fine work darling dear. Thank you
On June 7th 2008 Thuggishone Said: 
Thuggishone Greatness comes from a great poetis like yourself...now don't get any ideas theses aren't pick up lines...yet...lol...I have to look some up so I am prepared...by the way do they have rejection notes on the side? I think I'll need them...lol..great poem babe
On June 7th 2008 orangefizzpop Said: 
orangefizzpop wow, this quite saddened me, like fading footsteps of a chance that I never took..Great poem, I drifted away with it :)
On June 7th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Flippen awesome! :) I can understand to a point. It's like you want to be alone. But at the sametime you don't want to be. You shouldn't be, and even if that person is there that you want to be there. You still feel alone at heart. KMP more often I know I got alot to read but I enjoy your work alot. There is so much substance to it! :)
On June 6th 2008 Izzylicious92 Said: 
Izzylicious92 *Cough* is it a bad thing if this is the... wait lemme count..... fifteenth time I have read this poem? Yup it's just THAT good! :D
On June 5th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: 
moosegurl01 really great
On June 4th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 oh wow this was amazing..i really enjoyed it
On June 4th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said: 
teeniegirl015 Wow...this poem has so much more substance than a lot of poetry on here. It's really good. It's real and emotional. It's expressed. ♥ Really good. --Valerie Peace.
On June 4th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 I love it you did a great job
On June 4th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 this is good and it makes u think. well atleast it makes me think. an emotion many can relate too. nice.
On June 3rd 2008 tiffany1058 Said: 
tiffany1058 another great one
On June 3rd 2008 Izzylicious92 Said: 
Izzylicious92 I really like this poem. It just goes to show that there really are great poets out there who speak from their heart but use their head at the same time. This is an amazing poem and it is spectacular.
On June 3rd 2008 chayeah22 Said: 
chayeah22 Loved it. I think my favorite line is "Howe did she get to where they don't know" I don't know....it's just so beautiful...and she's so jaded.
On June 3rd 2008 JakeBozz Said: 
JakeBozz I'm..Too tired to write out a full-review as I do but I just want to say I admire this. The honesty of it all. The bare truth. The story of a girl sad and alone looking for affection. I admire you.
On June 3rd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x I love this! Great job!
On June 3rd 2008 yeahmankl1com Said: 
yeahmankl1com amazing :)