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Created:
05/22 2008
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My Poems
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MAYBE~ |
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Feel Nothing |
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I won't~ |
WEIRD
What the hell just went down
Why are we so shaken
By nothingness of everything
That we must've mistaken
Leave me sideways, dance me drained
Whatever you do, to ease my pain
Will leave things weathered
Will leave you torn
I used to feel happy
For being born
Leave it broken
Don't pick up their pieces
I'm not sorry when I say I mean it
Tears are over
Tears for games
Makes me feel
Ashamed of shame
So sweep it over
Dance me endless
Forever fighting
Breaking not bending
NOTE weird poem for me~
Please Login to post comments| On June 7th 2008 Thuggishone Said: |
| It was very optimistic the point of that comment well I missed it...lol...Truely purrdy...creative for what the mediocres were made of...Love ya hot pic too...wink...maybe we should go out for a drink...or maybe you should just call me a shrink do what ever you think will work...smiles...keep your head up...ashley...take care william |
| On June 5th 2008 Daylynn0709 Said: |
| I really liked that. It had a certain fluidity to it, that I haven't really read in your poems before. especially loved the first three lines of the last part. : ) |
| On June 3rd 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
| i agree it was very good |
| On June 1st 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| Very good, Loved the way it just seemed to flow along |
| On May 30th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| the poems i seem to like most on here are the one's i have to re read from the begining...i had to re read thi |
| On May 29th 2008 toxxicskank Said: |
| It is different but i like it. your an amazing writer!! |
| On May 29th 2008 chayeah22 Said: |
| I liked it! It was very emotional. The first line caught my attention. |
| On May 29th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| Honestly, I didn't think it was weird... I loved this. :) Nice job! |
| On May 29th 2008 chickenbroth Said: |
| I don't find this the least bit weird. It's awesome. Truely. I love the line, 'dance me drained' that is so rockstar, and romantic sounding to me. Great work. |
| On May 28th 2008 Pikkakard Said: |
| I loved the flow of this. Kinda danced through it if that makes sense to anyone else. Loved it |
| On May 27th 2008 twilight8218 Said: |
| i agree with the comment below! great job |
| On May 26th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| I don't think it's weird at all! Yes it's a differnt style for you. But It's a preety cool poem! ~Kudos~ |
