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My Poems
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Ana~Mia |
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27
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My Eyes... |
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15
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Untitled* |
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Untitled |
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It's nameless~ |
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I wish |
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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Untitled |
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I won't~ |
:*: floaty girl:*:
She met his gaze of blue
That's where her ending starts
She sparkled for him to
Place love in his heart
From there they couldn't part
She gave her heart so quickly
She opened her fragile soul
He took it all so hungrily
Drained her til unwhole
So here's how this unfolds
He'll never let her go
Good thing this girl's a dreamer
Like stars they are her high
For if he were much meaner
She'd surely break or die
Like inner child cry
When did it all start?
Details aren't my art
List of all he's done
To damage any fun
I give to you list one
When she was nineteen
She nearly choked
From big hot hands
Squeezing her throat
Her 100 pound entirety
Was smashed into walls
With blood on her clothes
and skin that was clawed
Red streaked hair
Equals bleeding pressure
Blood blonde hair
Meets the corner of her dresser
Bony shoulder blades
Become his punching bag
Til she can't even scream
Where everything seems bad
Like holding her over
A two story stair banister
With eyes that display
Nothing but sinister
All is done he leaves her alone to cry
and cuts off all her ties
Like phone cords sliced
and doors crashed in
Broken C.d's
Lights go dim
Shredded pictures of her memories
Smashed in cell phones
Stolen keys
He hugs her later
Kisses every bruise
Tries to sedate her
For now he's in the mood
She plans to run away
Someday~ someday
She'll say
(YEAH~ NOT THE BEST FLOW)
| On May 29th 2008 chayeah22 Said: |
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| This was really deep and close to home for me. I love it. Thank you for writing it. |
| On May 4th 2008 amanda710faith Said: |
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| i thought the flow was great. was it about u?? its really sad and no one deserves to be treated that way. great poem |
| On April 29th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said: |
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| The flow is perfect.
I really love this one!
I wish I could write as well as you do! :]
Great job! |
| On April 27th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| On April 27th 2008 LadyCha0s Said: |
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| love it. so sad. |
| On April 25th 2008 flutytute Said: |
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| *Cries* Wow, reminds me so much of the past... wonderful job! |
| On April 24th 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
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| i love this poem
i had no problem with the flow it was great lots of details very real you should really tell me if you write anymore |
| On April 24th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said: |
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| Yeah, like Morbidangel said, you're poem went together nicley. Good job. =] |
| On April 24th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: |
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| *sad, not dad lol |
| On April 24th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: |
| On April 24th 2008 twilight8218 Said: |
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| love it! |
| On April 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| that was awesome, definitely feel the pain |
| On April 24th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| I got full of mixed emotions on this one. wow nice job though :) You get a cookie! lol |
| On April 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: |
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| Unmarried~ also no one equals super man~ |
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| On April 24th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
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| It's still mighty powerful. wow |
| On April 24th 2008 Pikkakard Said: |


