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The weirdest poem I've ever written~

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Views (137) Other Created on 4-4-08 Flag

    I scare me now than ever before

    Aware of the danger still sweeping your floor

    Designed to play your role to keep the alignment

    Confined by my designs  all your asignments

    I could care less~ or could I

 

    You take the promise ring to nowhere world

    I keep the promise your mind is swirled

    Emerald beauty and love is over done

    I'd much rather dream of the sun

    I could feel less~or could I 

 

    Should I darling~ With all that's said

    Your new ideas are already dead

    Let's rewind  it~ fast forward my heart

    Are we breathing or torn apart

    I should know less~ or could I

 

    New somethings fill in your empty spaces

    I could be passive I can be faceless

    I'm not all there anyway 

    You're too aware of all you say

    I could hear less~ or should I 

 

    I write all tired~ you write nothing at all

    My words are senseless around the tall

    I could be graceful~ or should I

(no idea at all) Or do I??

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On May 3rd 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 Unique...WONDERFUL :] I love this one too! =]
On April 27th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 this is cool and unique.
On April 24th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 really great!
On April 24th 2008 sliversideup Said :
sliversideup this is great i love the lines: Emerald beauty and love is over done I'd much rather dream of the sun theres so much imagery convayed with in them nice job
On April 23rd 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aww i loved this! its really great
On April 21st 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Very surreal. Kind of like a Salvador Dali painting in written form. A great read.
On April 21st 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy This is really good. I love the flow... also very unique. Great job!
On April 14th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute Aw, your not alone though! Always remember that!
On April 14th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 wow that was weird but really good. Relax hun that's all you gotta do
On April 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 well i liked this very much it was clever and you hd to pay alot of attention to it love it man deeeep
On April 6th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll lol~ don't get all mad cause I can't do what you wanted in the chatbox~
On April 6th 2008 RalRasper Said :
RalRasper You know you are crying, Donkey dicks arent pleasant...... or so ive heard................
On April 6th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Aww~ thanks for trying to make me cry. :)
On April 6th 2008 RalRasper Said :
RalRasper Fuck this Garbage, You suck DOnkey Cock
On April 5th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 I really like this poem, but what you wanna cry about? Wouldn't you enjoy a comforting shoulder to let you cry on, as opposed to someone being mean to make you cry.