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The weirdest poem I've ever written~

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Created: 04/04 2008
Views: 213
Category: Other

My Poems

+ 31
Ana~Mia
+ 27
My Eyes...
+ 15
MAYBE~
+ 21
Forest
+ 21
Flower*
+ 18
Dreaming
+ 17
Everything's Crying~
+ 17
Untitled*
+ 12
Untitled
+ 16
It's nameless~
+ 19
I wish
+ 18
Feel Nothing
+ 19
Floating~
+ 20
Untitled
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I won't~

I could*or should I

    I scare me now than ever before

    Aware of the danger still sweeping your floor

    Designed to play your role to keep the alignment

    Confined by my designs  all your asignments

    I could care less~ or could I

 

    You take the promise ring to nowhere world

    I keep the promise your mind is swirled

    Emerald beauty and love is over done

    I'd much rather dream of the sun

    I could feel less~or could I 

 

    Should I darling~ With all that's said

    Your new ideas are already dead

    Let's rewind  it~ fast forward my heart

    Are we breathing or torn apart

    I should know less~ or could I

 

    New somethings fill in your empty spaces

    I could be passive I can be faceless

    I'm not all there anyway 

    You're too aware of all you say

    I could hear less~ or should I 

 

    I write all tired~ you write nothing at all

    My words are senseless around the tall

    I could be graceful~ or should I

(no idea at all) Or do I??

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On May 3rd 2008 chinadoll1215 Said: 
chinadoll1215 Unique...WONDERFUL :] I love this one too! =]
On April 27th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 this is cool and unique.
On April 24th 2008 twilight8218 Said: 
twilight8218 really great!
On April 24th 2008 sliversideup Said: 
sliversideup this is great i love the lines: Emerald beauty and love is over done I'd much rather dream of the sun theres so much imagery convayed with in them nice job
On April 23rd 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 aww i loved this! its really great
On April 21st 2008 Pikkakard Said: 
Pikkakard Very surreal. Kind of like a Salvador Dali painting in written form. A great read.
On April 21st 2008 Realmuckoy Said: 
Realmuckoy This is really good. I love the flow... also very unique. Great job!
On April 14th 2008 flutytute Said: 
flutytute Aw, your not alone though! Always remember that!
On April 14th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: 
EvilRaven9892 wow that was weird but really good. Relax hun that's all you gotta do
On April 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said: 
hiphuney420 well i liked this very much it was clever and you hd to pay alot of attention to it love it man deeeep
On April 6th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: 
sixtiesdoll lol~ don't get all mad cause I can't do what you wanted in the chatbox~
On April 6th 2008 RalRasper Said: 
RalRasper You know you are crying, Donkey dicks arent pleasant...... or so ive heard................
On April 6th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: 
sixtiesdoll Aww~ thanks for trying to make me cry. :)
On April 6th 2008 RalRasper Said: 
RalRasper Fuck this Garbage, You suck DOnkey Cock
On April 5th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 I really like this poem, but what you wanna cry about? Wouldn't you enjoy a comforting shoulder to let you cry on, as opposed to someone being mean to make you cry.
On April 5th 2008 misha9944 Said: 
misha9944 I've read over a couple of your poems and I really like this one. You're seriously talented. It makes me jealous :)
On April 4th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Aww that girl really got to you! I like this poem. I like how abstract it is. Yet I can still understand the message.
On April 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: 
sixtiesdoll Yeah~ I'm commenting my poetry again. I'm like a wound up guitar string these days. I think I need to cry. Someone say something mean to make me cry?