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The weirdest poem I've ever written~Rate this Poem
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Ana~Mia |
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My Eyes... |
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Untitled* |
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Untitled |
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It's nameless~ |
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I wish |
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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Untitled |
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I won't~ |
I could*or should I
I scare me now than ever before
Aware of the danger still sweeping your floor
Designed to play your role to keep the alignment
Confined by my designs all your asignments
I could care less~ or could I
You take the promise ring to nowhere world
I keep the promise your mind is swirled
Emerald beauty and love is over done
I'd much rather dream of the sun
I could feel less~or could I
Should I darling~ With all that's said
Your new ideas are already dead
Let's rewind it~ fast forward my heart
Are we breathing or torn apart
I should know less~ or could I
New somethings fill in your empty spaces
I could be passive I can be faceless
I'm not all there anyway
You're too aware of all you say
I could hear less~ or should I
I write all tired~ you write nothing at all
My words are senseless around the tall
I could be graceful~ or should I
(no idea at all) Or do I??
| On May 3rd 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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Unique...WONDERFUL :]
I love this one too! =] |
| On April 27th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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this is cool and unique. |
| On April 24th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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really great! |
| On April 24th 2008 sliversideup Said : | |
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this is great i love the lines: Emerald beauty and love is over done
I'd much rather dream of the sun
theres so much imagery convayed with in them
nice job
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| On April 23rd 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aww i loved this! its really great |
| On April 21st 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Very surreal. Kind of like a Salvador Dali painting in written form. A great read. |
| On April 21st 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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This is really good. I love the flow... also very unique. Great job! |
| On April 14th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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Aw, your not alone though! Always remember that! |
| On April 14th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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wow that was weird but really good. Relax hun that's all you gotta do |
| On April 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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well i liked this very much
it was clever and you hd to pay alot of attention to it love it man
deeeep |
| On April 6th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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lol~ don't get all mad cause I can't do what you wanted in the chatbox~ |
| On April 6th 2008 RalRasper Said : | |
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You know you are crying, Donkey dicks arent pleasant...... or so ive heard................ |
| On April 6th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Aww~ thanks for trying to make me cry. :) |
| On April 6th 2008 RalRasper Said : | |
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Fuck this Garbage, You suck DOnkey Cock |
| On April 5th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I really like this poem, but what you wanna cry about? Wouldn't you enjoy a comforting shoulder to let you cry on, as opposed to someone being mean to make you cry. |


