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Tuning in
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Created on 4-1-08
Fading out of me for a while
Tuning into your program
Bring along your happy style
I'll dust off all the glam
Lead me along to that creek that's so charming
Tuning into the water
Exit signs from a place I find harming
Where the fire feels much hotter
In Spring I feel much lighter
All peaceful boringly
I try to save a spider
It may have family
Let it free to see
Perhaps I change with the seasons
Who knows how long this will last
My bliss seems rather fleeting
So I have to make this fast
I get a new epiphany
Like hey It's my world too
Like I am you or you are me
Distractions make it blue~
Please Login to post comments| On May 3rd 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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This is amazing!
***** five stars :]
beautiful...! |
| On April 20th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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I totally understand the comment below mine... you're poems 'get to me' too. You have a way of stirring emotions which is a talent |
| On April 14th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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So beautiful! Your poems always get to me! You're amazing! =) |
| On April 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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aww this is great!
i deff save spiders too man
right on |
| On April 5th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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:D |
| On April 3rd 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Umm...ok, yeah, you are the most talented pot I have ever met, maybe I should throw the "e" in there where it was supposed to be, haha, you are an excellent poet, not pot. |
| On April 3rd 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Mag-Freakin-nificent!! Loved this one as well, ya know, you really are a very talented pot, keep up the good work!! |
| On April 3rd 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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I like it.. |
| On April 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Beeeeautiful! :D |
| On April 2nd 2008 angeleyes62580 Said : | |
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Good work!! I liked it alot |
| On April 1st 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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1 word (wow) |
| On April 1st 2008 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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I like it |
| On April 1st 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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Karma will surely be kind to you for your kind act. This one's distracting or distractable - a lot like our minds - in real life (in a good way) |
| On April 1st 2008 xkatelynex Said : | |
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love this! and..holy moley! lmao, i just realized ur birthdays the day before mine! |
| On April 1st 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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This is one of those poems that makes readers think! I love it! |
