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Ana~Mia |
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My Eyes... |
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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It's nameless~ |
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I wish |
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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I won't~ |
Storybook
You can't borrow me today
Filling in the empty spaces
For when I raise my voice someway
My lines are cut like LA faces
Delving into my very soul
As if I'm unsolved mystery
That heart of yours all black as coal
Will just conceal my history
I loved you then I miss you not
Sorry to spoil your tea time
I loved us when I nearly forgot
This girl who walked a straighter line
My brightside called me earlier
She said to tell you bye
I sowehow felt myself again
Now there's a lovely high
My eyes less blind
I'm unconfined
and I won't let me die
You wish to know my storybook
So I left it on the table
and if you take a closer look
You'll see why we're unable~
| On May 3rd 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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Very well written! I love it! One of my FAVES! :]
emotional.. and it has a perfect ending! |
| On April 20th 2008 amanda710faith Said : | |
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it was really good and creative. my favorite line was " Sorry to spoil your tea time" lol
but it also had a great ending. nicely done. |
| On April 20th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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This is great!! The ending was perfect. A great read |
| On April 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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omg! this was sooo amazing
seriously like im in awe |
| On April 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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omg! this was sooo amazing
seriously like im in awe |
| On April 5th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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very well written |
| On April 3rd 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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This is very much wonderful, and has a very nice flow and rythym to it, it is very musical, as I see many of your other comments refer to it as. I really like this one, can't wait for more! |
| On April 3rd 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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I loved it..great poem.. |
| On April 2nd 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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once my brightside gave me a jingle. he told me the darkside was looking for me! |
| On April 1st 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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awww shucks i love this one |
| On April 1st 2008 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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Thanks for telling me to check your stuff out Im really enjoying your stuff so far, youre definately a talented writer |
| On April 1st 2008 xkatelynex Said : | |
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totally awesomely awesome~~~like usual! |
| On April 1st 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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This is awesome...really emotional...LOVED IT! |
| On April 1st 2008 toxxicskank Said : | |
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i love it. your writing is amazing. |
| On April 1st 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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I love cynical statements whirling around (or inside, if you please) "I am woman, hear me roar" words, lol. Well done love! |


