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I'm trying something else for a change~

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Accidental tripping

Views (195) Other Created on 3-30-08 Flag

    Dust off all your records

    That swirl around your mind 

    All your brand new moves

    Are all my old designs

    I remember yesteryear

    When bubbles were never broken

    Do you remember yesterday

    Or were you high from smokin

 

    Oh accidental tripping

    Look at all we're missing

    Still pass it around

    Til all seems sound

    I try to manage kissing

 

    It's pretty to escape the real

    Fun to leave it sideways

    Still when all's numb to feel

    Is it worth it anyways

 

    Who knows if you actually care

    Still your clouding the fresh air

    So can we wind it down a bit

    Or must I throw my girly fit

 

    Are you as hungry as I am

    Taste the Hendrix with me

    We'll pretend that all is grand

    and the wind whisper's Mary

   

     

     

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On April 20th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Not sure why I like this, I just do. It had a lovely flow to it.
On April 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 aimee lovesis it :) deff one of your best fo real
On April 5th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 this is great too keep it up
On April 1st 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 Are you as hungry as I am Taste the Hendrix with me We'll pretend that all is grand and the wind whisper's Mary is my fav line
On April 1st 2008 mypoeticrage Said :
mypoeticrage Not too bad, a few things kinda threw me off but I like the whole idea, kind of cloudy thoughts that come with the high or what not lol
On April 1st 2008 toxxicskank Said :
toxxicskank i love it, i like your choice of words of it!!!
On April 1st 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess

This is definitely true to your screen name! lol. Here's a lovely photo for you which you might find amusing in light of this particular topic, although if one were succumbing to Mary's whispers it might be a little difficult to discern, no? Much more for the laughter after the confusion, but still. Plus some best wishes as well.
On April 1st 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane This one's good as well. I like the little adventure you take the reader on throughout it!
On April 1st 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem I love the first four lines! It's definlatly your style. COOL POEM!
On March 30th 2008 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 I like it!! Good Job
On March 30th 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei You did a really great job. Nice visuals definitely.
On March 30th 2008 amanda710faith Said :
amanda710faith this is a sweet poem!! good job!
On March 30th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin i like it it's trippy and fun to read great job!
On March 30th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 wow you are really good at this!
On March 30th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Gosh I haven't listened to Hendrix in a long time, but this poem just set the mood and took me back to places I prefer visiting only in memory. haha Very different kind of write for you and I like seeing you venture! :)