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My Poems
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Ana~Mia |
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My Eyes... |
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Untitled* |
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Untitled |
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It's nameless~ |
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I wish |
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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Untitled |
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I won't~ |
My sister
I was much stronger than she was
I the one dancing, all sassy and chancing
A little girl lauging more then she does
My sister less daring than I cause~
She the one crying, all sad, and feared flying
A little girl seeing more than I was
I danced through the years
All detailed with mirrors
Learned I had charm
Carless unharmed
With no one to warn me
Of some who were mean for their own buzz
He was much older than I was
I was still twelve
When I first felt hell
My dreams turned to screams
I danced then I fell
My sister saw Angels
I looked at demons
My sister was stronger than I was
I tiptoed through fears
Hiding all tears
Eating less and less
Until I was a mess
No more
dancing
Subtract the
charm
No more
chancing
Take back the
harm...
My sister much stronger than I was
She the one caring, more cautious, less daring
My sister is better than me cause~
I'm the one crying
All frightened
Tried dying
My sister's still stronger than I am...
(sorry it doesn't flow well. Not my best really. Still it tells the story.)
| On May 28th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: |
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| just wow.. |
| On April 5th 2008 stef4732 Said: |
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| wow this brought tears to my eyes gurl great job :) |
| On March 30th 2008 amanda710faith Said: |
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| i think its really good. i think strength to realize..that someone is stronger than you..when you thought u were in the first place. if that makes sense lol. =] |
| On March 29th 2008 vburciaga Said: |
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| WOW this one is really strong... i really enjoyed it, i loved it |
| On March 29th 2008 hiphuney420 Said: |
| On March 28th 2008 toxxicskank Said: |
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| i like it! |
| On March 28th 2008 flutytute Said: |
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| This is one of my favorites, definitely! I love it a lot! Amazing! |
| On March 28th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| Yeah this is very nice! Lovez it lots! Great emotion! :) |
| On March 28th 2008 Thuggishone Said: |
| On March 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| That dude was being nice! It's wonderful as usual! |
| On March 28th 2008 ZD1990 Said: |
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| It tells the story like you said, "My sister saw Angels, I looked at demons." I like that for some reason. We both wrote something about our sisters :D
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| On March 27th 2008 Jermie6363 Said: |
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| i love it !=)) |
| On March 27th 2008 mcihellejane Said: |
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| Very strong emotions in this one. I like the way you wrapped all the lines and words together towards the end. |
| On March 27th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| On March 27th 2008 fawzia11 Said: |
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| *hugs* Awesome!
I loved it!
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| On March 27th 2008 LadyCha0s Said: |
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| i love it. ur awesome. |
| On March 27th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
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| i still like it tons!!! *hugs* |
| On March 27th 2008 kesaia1029 Said: |
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| You're right..it tells the story very well =).I like this very much.You go girl!!xD =D |
| On March 27th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said: |
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| Nice word choices, love the emotion |
| On March 27th 2008 yeahmankl1com Said: |
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| I like it alot i think it is amazing! :) |


