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I wrote this when I had a horrid fever.Rate this Poem
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My Poems
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Ana~Mia |
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27
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My Eyes... |
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15
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MAYBE~ |
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21
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Forest |
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21
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Flower* |
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18
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Dreaming |
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17
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Untitled* |
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12
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Untitled |
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It's nameless~ |
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19
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I wish |
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18
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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Untitled |
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I won't~ |
Pretending~
No time to rewind
Or begin at the start
Everything's broken
Or falling apart
You don't understand
We have different books
I can't trust your hand
Or meaningless looks
So please don't bother trying to save me
So all your sad actions seem justified
It could take forever for you to find me
Searching for something to push aside
Ignore every demon
While some are left screaming
Smile all happy
Be boring try sappy
Pretend not to feel
When everything's hollow
Feign some excitement
To cry more tomorrow
It's really not hard to register it all
You don't need to strain to watch it fall
Our weakened love
The drowning skys
My cloudy heart
Or broken eyes~
(I'm not deppresed people!) Only writing :)
Please Login to post comments| On June 1st 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| I see why you had me read this. it has an internal query that i like. this is good. |
| On April 5th 2008 stef4732 Said: |
| I love your poems always |
| On April 3rd 2008 mypoeticrage Said: |
| I like it. its very blunt |
| On March 29th 2008 pjjustin Said: |
| wow me likes very much way of writing lol!!! |
| On March 26th 2008 fawzia11 Said: |
| I like it :)
Here come the "teacher words"
Nice job!
Keep writing more Ashley! |
| On March 26th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: |
| The obvious door opens nothing... That's fine. :) |
| On March 26th 2008 ZD1990 Said: |
| Hmm deep, too deep. Nothing really sticks out. |
| On March 26th 2008 Jermie6363 Said: |
| love it love it |
| On March 25th 2008 flutytute Said: |
| wOw!!!!!!! Love it! |
| On March 25th 2008 toxxicskank Said: |
| wow, this is amazing. I like how it flowed. |
| On March 25th 2008 hiphuney420 Said: |
| o0o0o very intense i love this alot
its a masterpiece! |
| On March 25th 2008 LadyCha0s Said: |
| thats me right now. love this. make a book full of poems!!!! and i'll buy every one!!! lol im serious. |
| On March 25th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| I love the expression in this. "You don't understand
We have different books I can't trust your hand
Or meaningless looks." So unique I love it! :)
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| On March 25th 2008 xXLaStKiSsXx Said: |
| its really good!! |
| On March 25th 2008 lillex64 Said: |
| love it |
| On March 25th 2008 sageravens Said: |
| Another fantastic peice. Damn fever can make us write some pretty deep stuff. I'm glad you caught it on paper though. |
| On March 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| Even in sickness, you are great, Loved it, especially the first stanza, definitely feel that all the time |
| On March 24th 2008 kesaia1029 Said: |
| (evil fevers!!!D:) I really like this,its very deep.Like it very much =) |
| On March 24th 2008 angeleyes62580 Said: |
| Wow!! I think you did a wonderful Job |
| On March 24th 2008 mcihellejane Said: |
| I like it. It has such a nice, gentle flow for the sadness that it holds..Nice job though! |
| On March 24th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said: |
| I REALLY LOVE THIS ONE!
~Very..deep?
Your really great!
:]
good work! |
| On March 24th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
| Well only writing is wonderful!! Looooves it! |
| On March 24th 2008 Thuggishone Said: |
| very nice my favorite part is:
Pretend not to feel
When everything's hollow
Feign some excitement
To cry more tomorrow
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| On March 24th 2008 xkatelynex Said: |
| i LOVE this. i REALLLLLY do. btw whats ur name, lmao?! |
| On March 24th 2008 twilight8218 Said: |
| wow very deep... i like it a lot! |
