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Views (255) Worry Created on 3-15-08 Flag

    Lack of sunlight

    Nothing warm

    I'm gathered in the night

    My body leaving torn

 

    Scratches and bruises

    Haunt my sleep always

    Anything he chooses

    To keep me in my daze

 

    I forgot to count my memories

    I place them here or there

    Lock it away so he can't see

    Or catch me unaware

 

    I've always felt like a butterfly

    Empty fluttering in my song

    I can't allow my beat to die

    Still I follow everything wrong

 

    I don't think of what may happen to me

    Only float away, til I can't see

 

    The red is bold

    The light unclear

    My aura is sold

    So I disappear~

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On April 29th 2008 liz720614 Said :
liz720614 love it. i love your poems:]
On April 1st 2008 mypoeticrage Said :
mypoeticrage awesome writing
On March 17th 2008 counterpart Said :
counterpart wow.. thats good.
On March 17th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s i love it...your so talented
On March 17th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone I would have to say I like the wording and the rhythm of this poem the flow is incredible very self explanatory well I think you get where I'm coming from anyway take care and remember great work.
On March 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is real good! I'm speechless! lol
On March 17th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 o0o0ooo i love this its beautiful i like how you reworded everything to make it seems so complex instead of putting it simply
On March 16th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin this is an emotion outpour i love it great job!
On March 16th 2008 mcrfan4life66 Said :
mcrfan4life66 omg this is soo amazing!! i love it!
On March 16th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 wow,wonderful.
On March 16th 2008 dangg101 Said :
dangg101 *jaw dropping* ok i FREAKING loved it, it was GREAT and SAD at the same time
On March 16th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I love it, but so sad! Great work!
On March 16th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very good, very emotional, loved it
On March 16th 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 very good, keep writing..
On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute wow... amazing!
On March 15th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 awee
On March 15th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Awww... so sad i know how you feel my ex was crazy but i thought he was my soul mate
On March 15th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Definitely agree with PSY's comment. This is incredibly sad, but powerfully written.
On March 15th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Wow...this is like jaw dropping in a way...no other way to explain it.
On March 15th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 so sad...