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Created on 3-14-08
I'm tired of crying
Unaware when your lying
I wish to leave it all
My brain is too shattered
My heart is quite battered
No one can catch my fall
I'm not able to fly
I just learn to cry
Nothing but endless tears
Drowning in your grasp
Unable to get past
All my petty fears
I'm sorry I'm so far away
I'm forgotten when I stray
Never so perfect
I day-dream ways to end me
I can't see the life that you see
Always find myself flawed
Sometimes just let me be~
Nothing...
Please Login to post comments| On April 3rd 2008 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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Another one full of emotion that keeps ya hooked til the last line, I've liked just about all your stuff so far, I'll read more when I can |
| On March 16th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Definitely my favourite so far. Great poem! |
| On March 15th 2008 Kep89 Said : | |
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great word |
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great word |
| On March 15th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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Amazingly awesome. [: |
| On March 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I love this! It's sooo good! This is my favorite from you so far! :) |
| On March 15th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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BEAUTIFUL |
| On March 15th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I love it girl keep on writing :) |
| On March 15th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very emotional, very good |
| On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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Wow, your writing always gets to me! =) |
| On March 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Wow This is great. I really love this one. Keep up the great work! :) |
