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I haven't a clue~ enjoy if capable~

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My little confusion poem~

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    Lovely shattered pieces

    outlining my heart

    Trying to fix it...

    I wonder how~ 

    Dainty weathered flower

    Bound to fall apart

    Beautifully ugly...

    I ponder why~

 

    Let's erase the noise

    try the silence for a spell

    Leave out the thinking...

    Feel the zen~

    Ungraceful yet poised

    Never one to yell

    Happily damaged...

    let it fall freely~   

   

     Where is she coming from?

     It wasn't  from your way

     Allow her confusion...

     nothing else to say~

 

 

     

     

   

     

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On March 15th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 it makes you think and it can lead you to a million differnet thoughts, thats the best part!
On March 15th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 i love it, it may be different, but i like different.
On March 14th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Stop telling people not to like this. I thought it was great! Truly!!!
On March 14th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Broken, damaged, and wearhered are beautiful when it comes from expirences that have stained our hearts beautiful learning is seen in time confusion only lasts for that moment :) I Love It!!!
On March 14th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Life is full of contradictions, it makes perfect sense to me, Loved It!!
On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum I liked it...It was satisfying for some reason...Awesome job.
On March 14th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll lol~ you guys don't actually have to read this one :)
On March 14th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone lol...I likes it... sadness
On March 14th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute It makes sense to me! I love it!
On March 14th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I know it doesn't make sense~ Still I like it for that. :)
On March 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Ok yeah it is a lil confusing. Ungraceful yet poised After that part. I was a little quized. All the rest before was wonderful!