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I know I scare you

Views (346) Anger Created on 2-28-08 Flag

    I know I sometimes scare you

    My danger's in my fears

    I'll happpily hide  under someone else's arm

    To lessen any tears

 

    I'm not your perfect Angel

    I won't conform to lies

    I mess up all the time

    It's  like you have ten spies

 

    I go away to anywhere

    To escape your empty stare 

    You look too closely at my face

    I always feel so scared

 

    I know I sometimes scare you

    I'm sure you scare me more

    You make me want to hide always

    It's like your keeping score

 

    I know that you are wrong

    I have to walk away

    But when you sing that song

    Your forcing me to stay

 

    Something strange

    when I'm around you

    It's hard to breathe

    So hard to see

    My Mom warned me

 

    She told me you had evil eyes

    You pushed her away

    I was sixteen

    and you were wise

   

    You told me lies

    You made me cry

    I hated you

    From the moment I knew

    I couldn't flee your spies 

 

    Hear I stand screaming

    I can't stand what I've become

    Too scared to leave

    Now too tired to run

 

    I'm stuck in your world

    Just know I hate you

    I was never your "girl"

    I fucking hate you 

 

    Now watch me twirl~

 

    I know I scare you sometimes

    You know I'm geetting stronger

    I've learned to trick your evil spies

    You won't have me much longer... 

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On March 25th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 WOW that is wonderful!!!!!
On March 15th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 (BEAUTIFUL)100%
On March 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 this is amazing i loved it! your a great writer
On March 8th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute Love it!
On March 7th 2008 digitaldiva425 Said :
digitaldiva425 This is one of my fav's.
On March 4th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s flippin awesome! i love this
On March 3rd 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 very nice i like it
On March 3rd 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I loved the retaliation at the end...Keep it up (the retaliation & the writing!) Don't back down-only you know what you have to do! *encouraging hug*
On March 2nd 2008 alex5005 Said :
alex5005 thats pretty good, i like it
On March 2nd 2008 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic wow, that is so amazingly written! intense, and i know the feeling of being trapped :-\ i love this poem though, very good job
On March 1st 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 wow very nice!
On February 29th 2008 joejoh Said :
joejoh outstanding! great job and good imagination!
On February 29th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard I know what it's like to get trapped into a world you feel you can't get out of. I liked the ending because it suggests you have the strength to get out of this controlling situation.

Very well written, too

On February 29th 2008 biggreedy22 Said :
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It is a beautiful play on words. I love how you keep it open to interpretation, very skillful. This is the 1st thing I read and I'm craving more....
On February 29th 2008 biggreedy22 Said :
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It is a beautiful play on words. I love how you keep it open to interpretation, very skillful. This is the 1st thing I read and I'm craving more....