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Views (150) Anger Created on 2-27-08 Flag

     There's something down there

     we're searching the streets.

     A crime over there

     It gives us the creeps

 

    I don't want to go

    Let's leave the scene

    I remember the leaves

    I remember my screams.

 

    I've lost my ghost in this place

    I told you I don't care to feel the burn

    You  promised to set me free of this place

    Why do you want me to return?

 

    I'm running now

    There's no way out

    I told you I want to forget

    You can leave town

    leave me with  doubt

    You wonder why I always fret.

 

    It's crashing on me

    You did hear my screams

    I hate you!

    Why didn't you do anything?

 

    You heard me cry

    You let me die

    It was you all along

    Don't sing me a song.

 

    I have to go

    from all I know

    I'm all alone

    I feel the cold

 

    I go back to the forest

    I'm a little girl again

    My ghost is still twelve

    with eyes that are frightened

 

    I touch  her hand

    she flies away

    I smile  at this

    Good bye I say

 

    More tears to brighten my face

    I wish for my own embrace.

 

    I write about this

    I still feel sad

    Just go away

    Don't drive me mad

 

    Up and away I'll fly

    In search of blissful  sky~

 

     

     

 

  

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On March 12th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 score i love it
On March 12th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 score i love it
On March 4th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s awww
On March 3rd 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 wow i love it
On March 3rd 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane Wow-this one was emotional..I still can't imagine what you went through. How long ago did that happen to you?
On February 28th 2008 professormcgee Said :
professormcgee bravo! I definatly felt emotion in that one, you are a true poet
On February 28th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin i liked it it was awesome!
On February 28th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very good, I don't really know what else to write, it was really good, though
On February 28th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard I read 'Forest', then re-read this poem. I can't imagine how you'd get closure on something like this.

Well written, but very, very sad

On February 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem cool peom! It's like a dream!
On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This is based on something that took me ages to even write about. I don't exactly take it lightly>
On February 28th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said :
teeniegirl015 This is really cool too. Sad, but cool. The way it was written. ♥
On February 28th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :
adammckiel2000 i really like this one
On February 27th 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 very interesting poem...I like it..
On February 27th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone I like it...it is good...easy to understand if you write and read poetry thing's should be understood.