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I'm tired once again~ feedback?

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Views (172) Other Created on 2-27-08 Flag

    Damaged pieces

    Lack of light

    steady line

    Not tonight

    

    Endless meanings

    Love for  thrill

 

    Sometimes you turn away

    your life lines

   

    Falling down

    empy cry

    meet the ground

    try to try

    

    Flee the scenes

    Leave the world

 

    Sometimes

    You turn away your lovelines

 

    See the door

    Find a glow

    Nothing more

    What a show

 

    Sometimes we lose ourselves 

    In

    Lifelines

    Lovelines.

    

 

    

 

 

   

     

 

 

 

 

     

    

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On March 14th 2008 alex5005 Said :
alex5005 That's really good...simple, yet has meaning and interesting to read. You're talented, keep it up.
On March 3rd 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane Didn't even notice the "empy"! I like this one-it kinda draws ya in a little bit. If I tried to write when I was tired, I don't think anyone would understand a thing I tried to say :) Nice job!
On February 28th 2008 betyoucantgess Said :
betyoucantgess dude,
thats amazazing!!
love it

On February 28th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :
adammckiel2000 what the hell they talkin bout lame this one is awsome!
On February 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem LOL see I just made a mistake! And I wasn't doing it on purpose!
On February 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Aww thats a nice poem! These other people are lame! Brush them off! I make mistakes typing towho dosen't? Were all human!
On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Thanks~ I figured it out the first time~ that is all. :)
On February 28th 2008 smlesarahsmile Said :
smlesarahsmile kinda lame
On February 28th 2008 smlesarahsmile Said :
smlesarahsmile kinda lame
On February 27th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin i think its not the way it should be understood more like the way it can be understood if that makes sence well great job anyway :)
On February 27th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said :
teeniegirl015 I totally get this. I like it a lot. You are really good with expressing emotion. It's totally sincere and the wording makes it even lyrical.
On February 27th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :
adammckiel2000 wow awsome
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Wow..Love it!
On February 27th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very good
On February 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll So there's a damn typo~ "empy" should say empty~ lol that is all.