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Starving artist~

Views (124) Other Created on 2-27-08 Flag

    My starving artist

    please pull away

    from all your work

    I wish to play.

    My beautiful artist

    I love his way~

 

    He's  on to something

    He's on his way

    My lovely artist

    Without the pay

    I wish he'd come and play

 

    Broken boys

    don't run away

    Broken boys

    not much to say

 

    They say it all in subtle manner

 

    I just watch in awe

    My starving artist 

    I know you see what I saw. 

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On June 16th 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay I'll agree, the ending is brilliant. I think the form/rhyme is a tad off, though..but great job. Also, don't be afraid to call yourself a poet-everyone has a little room to work. -Lozer™=]
On March 15th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 awww its really good!
On March 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 i love the flow this has
On February 28th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :
adammckiel2000 i love it...really are a good writer
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love it!
On February 27th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth This one just skipped along. LaLaLa
It was a fun read. :)
On February 27th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 I really like that, it don't say much, but it gets plenty of point across, very good
On February 27th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone Me thinks you is boy crazy on this one but me isn't always right on everything...Me likes it...maybe me has a chance after all... lol
On February 27th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Emotional good work!
On February 27th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I like, I like :) Very nice little write. The end is perfect..