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Shatter

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    If he leaves early

    I won't be the one to save him

    Once I'm gone he'll slowly disapear.

 

    I know quite surely

    I'll never get away I gave him

    too much to let him scream into my ear

 

    He likes my way

    The girl he shatters.

 

    I left early

    came back here to find you

    all alone and slicing up my clothes.

 

    You love to hurt me

 

    still I go away to places

    you'll never know

    Somewhere with empty faces

    I have to go before it shows

     

    You love my face

    the face to shatter.

 

    You know I'm gone now

    I still remain

    but I'll never be too near

    I know that your the one I fear

   

    You want your way

    but I won't shatter 

   

  

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On March 15th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 Always a big fan of your work. what a emotional fell i have right now.......
On March 14th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 applaud
On March 12th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s wow...love it
On March 8th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute *wipes tear off my cheek*
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Wow...Very unique and emotional. Love it!
On February 27th 2008 mcrfan4life66 Said :
mcrfan4life66 Wow, this is amazing! deep, very good! :]
On February 27th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem omg! This is a good poem! I'm so sorry though! I know you'll will recover! Keep your head up!
On February 26th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :
adammckiel2000 loved it
On February 26th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin i like it i like the emotion and the way you had the words arranged it was very strong
On February 26th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 I love it I feel your pain and i know this sadness
On February 26th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 This has a lot of pain... so sad. *2 thumbs up*
On February 26th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very sad, but very well done
On February 26th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone Me thinks you should kick his arse and set him on fire for shits and giggles...Holler if you hear me sista I got your back...& your front...Wink..lol Me thinks you did good on this one...p.s stay away from @ssholes.william
On February 26th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane There's a lot of pain wound up in those words! Hugs to you~
On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 oooww you are/were in a lot of pain! but love the poem!
On February 26th 2008 sageravens Said :
sageravens Deep, talented, and emotional. I hope things get better for you.