Created By
Author's Comments
I know~ my poems are getting to far awayRate this Poem
My Poems
+47
|
+
30
|
Ana~Mia |
|
+
26
|
My Eyes... |
|
+
15
|
MAYBE~ |
|
+
21
|
Forest |
|
+
21
|
Flower* |
|
+
18
|
Dreaming |
|
+
17
|
Everything's Crying~ |
|
+
16
|
Untitled* |
|
+
12
|
Untitled |
|
+
16
|
It's nameless~ |
|
+
19
|
I wish |
|
+
18
|
Feel Nothing |
|
+
17
|
Floating~ |
|
+
19
|
Untitled |
|
+
17
|
I won't~ |
Along the way she'll fall~
Someone may say
that her spirit's broken
No one can save
what's said and done
and when she caves
to everthing unspoken
You mught turn your face
or ignore her fall
or not see at all
I don't want to see me down
never can shake it off or upturn my sad frown
I don't want to see her drown
Ran far away
from every open forest
stayed far away from any open touch
and now everyday
I fall on thorns that poke some
He might try to cry
if he saw her fly
if he let her die
I don't want to see me down
Can't turn away from the danger's in this town
I don't want to see her drown.
| On April 3rd 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
|
|
very good...cheer up ur beautiful..life and love start with you...hugs for you my friend.. |
| On March 21st 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
|
|
beautiful...smile darling |
| On February 29th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
|
|
Mysterious! I like! |
| On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
|
|
There's something really intense about the last stanza...Amazing work, as always! |
| On February 25th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
|
|
This may just be my new favorite of yours. I love the mix of emotions in it. I really like the way you wrote it as well :) *hugs to you* |
| On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
|
|
excellent emotion |
| On February 25th 2008 pjjustin Said : | |
|
|
nicely done i liked the emotion as well |
| On February 25th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
|
|
Love the emotion in this one, Great!! |
| On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
|
|
ow i felt that. Very emotional. but good. i like your style |
| On February 25th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
|
|
Very nice! me is happy for you can write thee emotions you feel inside and express it on paper. |
| On February 25th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
|
|
I don't want to see you down either. SMILE Don't worry, be happy!!! :) Nice write! |


