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I know~ my poems are getting to far away

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Along the way she'll fall~

Views (128) Fear Created on 2-25-08 Flag

    Someone may say

    that  her spirit's broken

    No one can  save

    what's said and done

    and when she caves

    to everthing unspoken

 

    You mught turn your face

    or ignore her fall

    or not see at all

 

    I don't want to see me down

    never can shake it off or upturn my sad frown

    I don't want to see her drown

 

     Ran far away

     from every open forest

     stayed far away from any open touch

    and now everyday

    I fall on thorns that poke some

 

    He might try to cry

    if he saw her fly

    if he let her die

 

    I don't want to see me down

    Can't turn away from the danger's in this town

    I don't want to see her drown.

   

 

 

     

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On April 3rd 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 very good...cheer up ur beautiful..life and love start with you...hugs for you my friend..
On March 21st 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s beautiful...smile darling
On February 29th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Mysterious! I like!
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic There's something really intense about the last stanza...Amazing work, as always!
On February 25th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane This may just be my new favorite of yours. I love the mix of emotions in it. I really like the way you wrote it as well :) *hugs to you*
On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao excellent emotion
On February 25th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin nicely done i liked the emotion as well
On February 25th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Love the emotion in this one, Great!!
On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 ow i felt that. Very emotional. but good. i like your style
On February 25th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone Very nice! me is happy for you can write thee emotions you feel inside and express it on paper.
On February 25th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I don't want to see you down either. SMILE Don't worry, be happy!!! :) Nice write!