sixtiesdoll

So I was tired not inspired

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Your light~ no one else's

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Created on 2-25-08

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All of the light

surrounds you

more then you need it to

All that I am

is nothing

more then a heart turned blue

All of the sky is shining for you.

When I try to breathe

you stop me

When I'm left to bleed you watch me

When I am scared crying

You leave me

I don't get to move

you'll make me stay for more tears.

I give you this my dear

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On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :

	Wow...Amazing!...I think I've said that of all of your poems, but still...Very emotional, fantastic work!

On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :

	i like it and understand it, though i have never felt this kind of pain.

On February 26th 2008 stef4732 Said :

	I loved it, i understand your pain and ive felt it a many of times great job

On February 25th 2008 mcihellejane Said :

	You still write well w/ lack of inspiration :) Nice job~

On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :

	sad very sad but theres love too very good

On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	it's still good for not being inspired (:

On February 25th 2008 Thuggishone Said :

	me thinks this one is good nice job

On February 25th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	I felt your pain in this one. Very Raw and Emotional. Great job!

On February 25th 2008 decembermint Said :

	i like it. it's very strong in the way of words, to the point and stinging language.