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Running Backwards
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Created on 2-23-08
I truly needed
what everyone needed
since you turned your head
to try to convey me
Everyone went for
what I never wanted
All I wish is to never be crying
If I'm still here
Try to hide me
If I'm too near
Look aside me
So don't worry darling
about the mornings
and don't worry
about me.
It's my story baby
You don't have to read my lines
This is my drama baby
You don't have to be my knight
If I'll never be
Close enough to this
trying hard to find
what I truly miss
I don't know what I miss
It's my weapon
It's all backwards
Like subsequently
wanting to glide.
So please don't allow me to die...
Please Login to post comments| On February 25th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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Neat... One of my favs |
| On February 25th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I like how your feelings just pour out of you in your writings. You wear your heart on your sleeve. |
| On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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i liked it |
| On February 25th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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I once ran backwards and my gym coach smacked me upside the head and was like, "AY, DONT SCREW AROUND!" |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Very sincere message, excellent rythym, Beautiful |
| On February 24th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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nice poem! |
| On February 23rd 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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i like it a lot! full of emotion... |
| On February 23rd 2008 mizzthang17 Said : | |
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really good.its very emotional. i like it
steph |
| On February 23rd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow. So emotional. I love it! |
| On February 23rd 2008 XEddiesBabyX Said : | |
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i loved it....really gud |
| On February 23rd 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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I agree with Michelle. It's a good thought. I love this one! it's great. |
| On February 23rd 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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Backwards is good me thinks...Let me contact me old teacher...Me think me mixed up in thee meanings...lol...I like it alot very nice amen to the true emotion in everything you write |
| On February 23rd 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like the layout to this one-your thought is good. |
