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The one who doesn't want to...
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Created on 2-22-08
I stare into some rainbows
That are hard for you to grasp
I see the darkness in the light
While you just glance right past.
I stare into the sad souls
See the light shine through the dark
You don't want to notice
You're comfortable where you are.
I still can't fathom how we came to be
You trouble me...
You're limited when you see.
Please Login to post comments| On April 1st 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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The rhythm is very very smooth, and the word choice impeccable. Wonderful expression :-) |
| On March 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Very good job! I LOVE it :) |
| On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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I love how your poems always seem to flow... |
| On February 25th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This is by far my favorite so far! |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very lovely |
| On February 23rd 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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Me thinks you is a good poetess... Me thinks this one is very nicely done...Seems you learned from one thee best of course I would teach you another subject...oops lol... I mean in writing wink |
| On February 23rd 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This is one of my favorites of yours-it kinda reminds me of my husband and I. I care about everyone and everything and he is so indifferent to mostly everything...Nice write~ |
| On February 23rd 2008 NLS101 Said : | |
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very nice.. lovely weave of words |
| On February 22nd 2008 pjjustin Said : | |
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this one pretty good i like it! i enjoyed the mix of feelings |
