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My attempt at a happy poem!

Views (100) Joy Created on 2-21-08 Flag

    I'm Yoga and caffiene

    A girl who loves to scream

    And inorganic scenes

    Are never where I lean.

 

    So call me when your wired

    My words are getting tired

    So join the festivity

    if you wish

    to find me uninspired.

 

   Let us swine the spotlight

   Then we'll dance into the sad bored night

   I have to hurry back too soon

   Or else I'll miss my gosh damn  flight.

   

    First we'll  watch the fashion show

    Then we'll be thinspired

    we'll empty our selves

    with brand new games.

    and then we'll try inspired.

   

 

  (I have no idea~ I was (am) tired.)

Still tell me what you think~  

     

 

     

     

 

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On March 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Yep here your award! LOL this showing and interesting vibe.
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard I find it difficult to find the words when attempting happy poems. I did that with the first few I posted and they seem so forced. Just write what comes naturally, even if they are sad and a little depressing... writing is a way of getting rid of those feelings.

Still like the poem though.

On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 *does my dance* Yessss happsy poem!! You do get an award! yay!
On February 25th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Something tells me this was based on truth. Thumbs up.
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 not really happy, but it did have a certain little bounce to it
On February 23rd 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I give you two thumbs up-it was a cute little rhyme!
On February 22nd 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 This is a really cool poem. It's so exciting. lol Nice work! Keep it up! :)
On February 22nd 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin i really liked it it very cute and extremly charming lol great job!
On February 22nd 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone I like it ashley, Joy to the world all the boys and girls joy to the fishes in the deep blue sea joy to you and me....Kind of funny that song comes to mind being buzzed. lol peace william
On February 21st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I don't know if "joy" is the right word for it all~ but that's about as joyful as it's going to get for this girl. It's almost leaning towards trivial for me.