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What to call you? hmm... Untitled~

Views (118) Fear Created on 2-19-08 Flag

    Just rise above and

    shatter the sadness

    hold onto all love  

    dispose of the badness

 

    Try to smile

    when your heart is still drowning

    from all the tears

    and all of your of your frowning

 

    I worry someday

    I'll wander astray

    and I'll only have no one to follow

    I'll fall away

    from all things to say

    and I'll be gone before tomorrow

 

    If you rise above and

    shatter all sadness

    I'll hang onto your love

    and we'll dispose of the badness

 

    Then I'll float away...

    Not to worry

    I'm here

    Still hurry please hurry  

    or I may disapear. 

     

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On March 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem I don't see typos! Nice poem though!
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Brilliant poem once again! I didn't notice the typo either. Maybe I should pay more attention when reading.

Besides, typos are rarely noticed:
"I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it deosn't mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the olny iprmoatnt tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit a porbelm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Amzanig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt!"

On March 16th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute Absolutely wonderful!
On March 6th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s love it
On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 aw hun its lovely and just wonderful....
On February 25th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth No need to worry about the typo. I honestly didn't notice it, read right through it, until I saw Michelle's post and I went back to see what I missed. lol Even then it took me a sec to spot. Don't fret your pretty head. It was it was great. haha
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very good, I really like this one, lol, I didn't even notice the typo til the third time I read it, lol
On February 19th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone Very nice...Me thinks you are a great poet...Me thinks mistakes are only human
On February 19th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll so there's a typo obv. it's annoying me though~ it distracts from the damn poem~
On February 19th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I loved the poem. I was a little confused in the 2nd line of stanza 2-typo maybe?? Anyhow, no worries-it was great!