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Ana~Mia |
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My Eyes... |
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Untitled* |
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Untitled |
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It's nameless~ |
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I wish |
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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Untitled |
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I won't~ |
I won't~
If you were here
you could shatter my fear
My fear of no romanticism
My wanders of old transition
If I could go away
I'd always be dancing
upon new stars and always enchanting
I won't let me down
I'll keep my sky in the air
My feet won't touch cold ground
I'll sing without care
I'll have my wish
to be your dream
you can steal my kiss
and I won't scream
because I'll be away from here
I won't allow the sad egos
to enter my rainbow bubble
Or fall to my knees to please those
Those who are nothing
those who are bad
will be wished away
for making me sad
I only need this
My only daughter
and his only kiss
So take me away
or I'll surely be missed
| On March 17th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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Nicely done :]
I like this one a lot!
Very good! |
| On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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There's a nice feel to this one. Wonderfully written again... |
| On March 12th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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awesome |
| On March 8th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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...lovely... |
| On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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speechless has struck again! |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Very good |
| On February 15th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Thanks for the comments~ I was in a determined state when I wrote this. |
| On February 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I fell in love w/ the line "I'd always be dancing upon new starts and always enchanting" There is just a glow around this one. Great job! |
| On February 14th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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i like this alot, kinda different from anything ive read lately and i like your style :) |
