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here i go again

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Views (119) Passion Created on 2-14-08 Flag

    If you were here

    you could shatter my fear

    My fear of no romanticism

    My wanders of old transition

    If I could go away

    I'd always be dancing

    upon new stars and always enchanting

 

    I won't let me down

    I'll keep my sky in the air

    My feet won't touch cold ground

    I'll sing without care

 

    I'll have my wish

    to be your dream

    you can steal my kiss

    and I won't scream

   

    because I'll be away from here

    I won't allow the sad egos

    to enter my rainbow bubble

    Or fall to my knees to please those

 

    Those who are nothing

    those who are bad

    will be wished away 

    for making me sad

 

    I only need this

    My only daughter

    and his only kiss

   

    So take me away

    or I'll surely be missed 

     

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On March 17th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 Nicely done :] I like this one a lot! Very good!
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard There's a nice feel to this one. Wonderfully written again...
On March 12th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s awesome
On March 8th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute ...lovely...
On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 speechless has struck again!
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very good
On February 15th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Thanks for the comments~ I was in a determined state when I wrote this.
On February 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I fell in love w/ the line "I'd always be dancing upon new starts and always enchanting" There is just a glow around this one. Great job!
On February 14th 2008 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic i like this alot, kinda different from anything ive read lately and i like your style :)