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By Ashley marie~ aka:moi

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Floating~

Views (141) Love Created on 2-14-08 Flag

    I'm floating so high

    and falling for you

    The stars in my eyes

    stem from yours too

 

    I'm in love with a lie

    with something not said

    I wish for your sky

    for my sky is dead

 

    I floated up 

    and I'll have to fall down

    I'll shatter some cups

    and I'll try not to frown

 

    I still wish to float

    so lift me up high

    or I'll slit my throat

    or maybe just cry

   

    Don't help me cry

    I can do it myself

    even if it's a lie

    and nothing else

 

    Maybe if we said goodbye

    that would be sad

    but at least when I fall down

    it won't be as bad. 

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On June 25th 2008 blueyedshababe Said :
blueyedshababe I like the cycle, the sound of indecision, beutiful in it's own right.
On March 24th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This has an interesting cryptic feel to it! Nice!
On March 17th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 sooo well written! I love this one a lot! :] You are really great !
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard You are good! This is so well written
On March 12th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s love this. i can really relate to it.
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Well written, you are a very good writer!
On February 20th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone Me thinks the slitting your throat maybe might hurt me thinks but thee poem is good...btw me thinks your right about me poetry is better than me jokes
On February 15th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This is a love one~ Love that's not spoken of~ but yeah. If you like it~ then yay.