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By Ashley marie~ aka:moiRate this Poem
My Poems
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Ana~Mia |
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My Eyes... |
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Untitled* |
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Untitled |
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It's nameless~ |
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I wish |
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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Untitled |
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Floating~
I'm floating so high
and falling for you
The stars in my eyes
stem from yours too
I'm in love with a lie
with something not said
I wish for your sky
for my sky is dead
I floated up
and I'll have to fall down
I'll shatter some cups
and I'll try not to frown
I still wish to float
so lift me up high
or I'll slit my throat
or maybe just cry
Don't help me cry
I can do it myself
even if it's a lie
and nothing else
Maybe if we said goodbye
that would be sad
but at least when I fall down
it won't be as bad.
| On June 25th 2008 blueyedshababe Said : | |
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I like the cycle, the sound of indecision, beutiful in it's own right. |
| On March 24th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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This has an interesting cryptic feel to it! Nice! |
| On March 17th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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sooo well written!
I love this one a lot!
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You are really great !
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| On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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You are good! This is so well written |
| On March 12th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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love this. i can really relate to it. |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Well written, you are a very good writer! |
| On February 20th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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Me thinks the slitting your throat maybe might hurt me thinks but thee poem is good...btw me thinks your right about me poetry is better than me jokes |
| On February 15th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is a love one~ Love that's not spoken of~ but yeah. If you like it~ then yay. |


