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Ana~Mia |
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My Eyes... |
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Untitled* |
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Untitled |
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It's nameless~ |
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I wish |
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Feel Nothing |
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Floating~ |
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Untitled |
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I won't~ |
I wish
I wish I were something
Something not sad
I wish I could stomp on
everything bad.
I wish I'd grow up
I wish to stay young
I wish that I could do both and never have to run.
I wish you could hear me
when I scream for your hand
I wish that I'd never have to understand
I wish I were away from you
and all your fucked up lies
I wish I could go
where no one else flies.
I wish I was over
erased and somewhat gone.
I wish I was lower
and you'd let me go
so I could sleep forever
I wish for that so.
| On March 18th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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Oh i love it and i can feel you on this one |
| On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Great rhythm to this. Great poem! |
| On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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Great job :]
its very nice!
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| On March 8th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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Reminds me of me. Good job! |
| On February 25th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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nice!
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| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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wonderful! |
| On February 15th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This isn't my strongest work~ although I like the last part. |
| On February 13th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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*2 thumbs up* |


