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another poem-all hurried

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I wish

Views (116) Passion Created on 2-13-08 Flag

    I wish I were something

    Something not sad

    I wish I could stomp on

    everything bad.

 

    I wish I'd grow up

    I wish to stay young

    I wish that I could do both and never have to run.

 

    I wish you could hear me

    when I scream for your hand

 

    I wish that I'd never have to understand

 

    I wish I were away from you

    and all your fucked up lies

 

    I wish I could go 

    where no one else flies. 

 

    I wish I was over

    erased and somewhat gone.

 

    I wish I was lower

    and you'd let me go

    so I could sleep forever

    I wish for that so. 

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On March 18th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Oh i love it and i can feel you on this one
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Great rhythm to this. Great poem!
On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 Great job :] its very nice!
On March 8th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute Reminds me of me. Good job!
On February 25th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem nice!
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 wonderful!
On February 15th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This isn't my strongest work~ although I like the last part.
On February 13th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 *2 thumbs up*