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Created on 2-13-08
Falling into deppression
fading out of light
Scared of your obsession
searching for some life
Here I stand so vacant
turn away and I'll be gone
So grab thy hand and don't let go
Just sing me one last song
Clouds so soft and dream-like
I wish to go up there
lift me to the highest one
I'll make a wish that cares
Tell me something hopeful
pretend that you are you
Cry for me and all the clouds
and I shall weep more too.
Please Login to post comments| On March 18th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I loved the rythym of this one |
| On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Beautifully written. Superb flow and choice of rhymes |
| On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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beautiful!
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really great work~ |
| On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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One of my fravorites! |
| On March 11th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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love it |
| On February 25th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Oh my gosh! Thats really good I love it! |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Loved the rythym, had a definite feel about it, Great Job!! |
| On February 20th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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Me is crying for you but me no thinks you can hear me maybe me needs to express me tears through thee rain... Very nice poem ashley |
| On February 13th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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*thumbs up* you blew me away on this one! :) Great work! |
| On February 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is probably one of my best. I hope you like it. |
