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Ana~Mia |
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My Eyes... |
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MAYBE~ |
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Forest |
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Flower* |
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Dreaming |
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Everything's Crying~ |
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Feel Nothing |
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Everything's Crying~
So there you are once again
telling me your promises
turning and twisting my zen
Now here I am ignoring you
my focus on something scary but true
I tried to look back
still something was wrong
You were missing
and I was never so strong
So here I am staring ahead
and I can see nothing
My nothing is dead
Now there you are
trying to make sense
but there are soo many layers
too sad and pretense
Something's still missing
and everything's crying.
| On May 27th 2008 kendog19790206 Said : | |
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very nice, I can relate...of course I was the one telling promises, very good at reminding me and everyone of a lot of things some we would probably rather not remember yet we need to remember |
| On March 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Very very cool! I love it ALOT! |
| On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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I don't think anything is missing in this poem. I think you captured the emotion in those few chosen words. |
| On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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This is great!
But.. i dont know.. I feel like something is missing?
But, still, great work!
:] |
| On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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*wipes away tear* Now you've got me crying. *smiles* |
| On March 15th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I love your poetry its so well written |
| On March 15th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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well i dont like it... I LOVE IT!lol |
| On February 27th 2008 digitaldiva425 Said : | |
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I like this but it dose feel like it cut off at the end. It's great though i really liked it. |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I feel it could have been a little longer, maybe open some layers, let us peek inside? It just feels kinda cut off at the end, but I enjoyed it til then |
| On February 23rd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Nice work! |
| On February 20th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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Me thinks this work right here is a 110%...Very good I'll be waiting on me cut when you become famous! |
| On February 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I wrote this last summer~ I hope someone likes. Comments are lovely~ |


