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One of my better~

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Everything's Crying~

Views (127) Other Created on 2-13-08 Flag

    So there you are once again

    telling me your promises

    turning and twisting my zen

    Now here I am ignoring you

    my focus on something scary but true

   

    I tried to look back

    still something was wrong

    You were missing

    and I was never so strong

 

    So here I am staring ahead

    and I can see nothing

    My nothing is dead

 

    Now there you are

    trying to make sense

    but there are soo many layers

    too sad and pretense

 

    Something's still missing 

    and everything's crying. 

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On May 27th 2008 kendog19790206 Said :
kendog19790206 very nice, I can relate...of course I was the one telling promises, very good at reminding me and everyone of a lot of things some we would probably rather not remember yet we need to remember
On March 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Very very cool! I love it ALOT!
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard I don't think anything is missing in this poem. I think you captured the emotion in those few chosen words.
On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 This is great! But.. i dont know.. I feel like something is missing? But, still, great work! :]
On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute *wipes away tear* Now you've got me crying. *smiles*
On March 15th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 I love your poetry its so well written
On March 15th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 well i dont like it... I LOVE IT!lol
On February 27th 2008 digitaldiva425 Said :
digitaldiva425 I like this but it dose feel like it cut off at the end. It's great though i really liked it.
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 I feel it could have been a little longer, maybe open some layers, let us peek inside? It just feels kinda cut off at the end, but I enjoyed it til then
On February 23rd 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Nice work!
On February 20th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone Me thinks this work right here is a 110%...Very good I'll be waiting on me cut when you become famous!
On February 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I wrote this last summer~ I hope someone likes. Comments are lovely~