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Dreaming

Views (148) Love Created on 2-13-08 Flag

    A simple daydream

    is all this is

    I never can dream what I want

     I miss you in ways that never existed

 

   My heart screams something that's not.
 

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On May 2nd 2008 laritasquirrel Said :
laritasquirrel Short but... WOW :)
On March 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Aww love this! It's really good! :)
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard You've packed a lot into a short poem. Can definitely feel the heartache in this.
On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 This is wonderful! Short and sweet. I love it!
On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute Wonderful!
On March 14th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 I feel you on this one its beautifuly written :)
On March 11th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s short sweet and to the point. love it
On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 aww so does mine
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 definitely
On February 23rd 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said :
AngelOfNight47 short. sweet. and. amazing. It's an awesome poem. I love it. It's short, but has a great message.
On February 22nd 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 This is good!
On February 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll There's always that someone you wish to understand more~